Insides of a Haunted House
surviving inside a ghost she couldn’t see

Insides of a Haunted House
You don’t notice the haunting at first.
The house seems warm. Familiar. Even inviting. It’s charming in the beginning—perfect lighting, a view just enough to distract you from the shadows. You don’t feel the cold draft crawling beneath the walls yet. You don’t see the cracks behind the paint.
And you don’t realize you’re being studied.
Not by ghosts, but by something far worse.
Evelyn moved in with Thomas on a rainy November afternoon. His apartment, tucked neatly between two buildings like it was hiding from the world, felt oddly timeless. No clocks. No mirrors. Just photos—lots of them—of him, in every pose, every angle, smiling like he owned the sun.
She called it “eccentric.”
He called it “confidence.”
At first, he loved her brilliantly. Too brilliantly. Candlelit dinners, long talks at 2 AM, notes on her pillow, stories of how “different” she was. How lucky *he* was. How all his exes were “crazy,” unlike her.
She laughed. She believed him.
The haunting began the day she stopped laughing.
The first door slammed when she forgot to text him back during a meeting. He told her it was “just stress.” The second came when she mentioned his flirting at a party. He said she was “too sensitive.”
Then came the mirrors—finally, they appeared. But only in places she couldn’t avoid: the bathroom, the bedroom, the hallway. Thomas began pointing things out.
“How come you don’t smile like you used to?”
“Did you gain weight?”
“Why are you always so tired lately?”
“You used to care more about yourself.”
She started looking in those mirrors too much, then not at all.
The house changed with her.
Rooms began to echo when she spoke. Doors creaked open when she was alone, and she’d swear the thermostat dropped every time she stood up for herself. Her favorite mug disappeared. Her journals were found out of place. Sometimes, she’d hear him whispering to himself from the other room—sometimes her name, sometimes just... nothing.
But when she’d ask, he’d smile and say, “You must be imagining things.”
She started to believe she was.
Every fight ended with him crying.
“I’m sorry—I just love you too much.”
“I can’t help it, I’ve been hurt before.”
“You make me feel like I’m not good enough.”
Evelyn, heart heavy with empathy, folded again and again.
Until she forgot her shape.
She lost her job trying to please him. Lost friends defending him. Her sister stopped calling, told her she’d changed. Evelyn stopped writing. She couldn’t concentrate anymore. Couldn’t breathe the same way in rooms he entered.
She thought, *Maybe I’m the problem.*
He said, *You are.*
Thomas never yelled. He didn’t have to. His silence was sharper.
He’d go days without speaking to her. Sleeping beside her, eating with her, but completely cold. And then, one day, he’d reappear, bright and magnetic again, like the sun had come out.
He trained her to crave him like warmth.
And punished her with absence.
The house responded. Lights flickered more often. The sound of static filled the air when she cried. She’d hear knocking with no source, her name whispered just as she fell asleep.
Thomas said she was “overwhelmed.” Suggested she “take something.” Said she was “breaking down.”
She believed it.
Until the night she found the crawlspace.
Behind a false wall in the closet, Evelyn discovered a small door—old wood, rusted handle. Inside, it was full of shoeboxes.
Love letters.
To other women.
Pictures.
Of other lives.
All of them written in the same syrup-sweet voice he once used on her.
The dates overlapped. The lies bled through the years.
And beneath the boxes, a single journal. Not hers. His. Pages of manipulation strategies. Notes on her reactions. What made her cry. What worked. What didn't.
She dropped it.
The room moaned.
And for the first time, she saw the truth:
The house wasn’t haunted by ghosts.
She was.
Thomas found her sitting in the hallway, pale, broken. She held the journal to her chest.
He didn’t deny it.
He just crouched in front of her, tilted his head, and said:
“You’re not strong enough to leave me.”
It wasn’t a threat. It was a fact, in his mind. A prophecy.
But something broke inside her then—not like glass, but like a lock.
She stood.
She didn’t scream. She didn’t cry.
She walked.
And this time, the door didn’t slam behind her.
It closed with a click, gentle and final.
Outside, the air didn’t feel heavy.
The sky, for the first time in years, looked *wide.*
Evelyn didn’t have a suitcase. She didn’t even have shoes. But she had the journal. She had the silence—the real kind, the kind that doesn’t threaten or isolate. The kind that listens.
She stayed with her sister. Got help. Therapy. A job. Time.
It took months to peel back the layers of her own mind—to unlearn the idea that love is supposed to *hurt*, that silence is normal, that gaslighting is affection.
She cried when she laughed for the first time and realized it didn’t feel dangerous.
Thomas still lives in that house.
He’s found someone new, surely. The cycle always continues—for men like him, the house is always open.
But Evelyn no longer fears it. She no longer fears *him*.
Because she knows now:
The scariest haunted house is the one built from love twisted into a weapon
And she survived it.
Some houses creak because they’re old. Others creak because the truth is trying to get out. And some people? They creak the same way.
About the Creator
Gabriela Tone
I’ve always had a strong interest in psychology. I’m fascinated by how the mind works, why we feel the way we do, and how our past shapes us. I enjoy reading about human behavior, emotional health, and personal growth.



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