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Thunderstorm and Rain

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By Mark GrahamPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Who doesn't like a good thunderstorm? When you were little your parents probably told you it was God moving furniture around or bowling. As an adult we know it is just two air masses clashing together the hot and cold of it. I still like the idea of moving furniture around or bowling. That would mean to me that heaven will be a better version of what is here.

Thunderstorms

hurrying around gathering clouds and wind

undulating with rain pouring down

near where someone is

delivering

either

rain, hail, sleet or snow

steadily

timing the event

of

rain

mainly, but depending on the season that depends.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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