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The Wizard of Oz

If I'm Honest, It Could Use A Little Work

By Dane BHPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Critique Challenge

In this mostly Technicolor romp through thinly veiled metaphors, Judy Garland holds the audience - and herself - together through sheer force of will. A blend of innocence and ennui, of adventure and the homesickness that pulls you back, Depression-era audiences everywhere will wish they too could ride a tornado to Oz.

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  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Always found the ending anticlimactic. Great critique. I want to live my life in Technicolour.

  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Very good mini critique.

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Great mini critique. Well done!

  • E.K. Daniels2 years ago

    A nice contrast of the writing versus the film—indeed indicative of the times. Well done, and congrats!

  • Great to see an up-to-date critique of one of my favorite works of American literature. Written in an earlier era of economic low, filmed in another. Well done and congratulations on your win.

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    I don't mind it. She should have stayed in Oz...and maybe follow the red brick road! ;)

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    I was not a lover of this film as a child, but it was my toddler daughter's fixation, and I found out it was outstanding.

  • This was fantastic! Excellent review!

  • Nice 💖🎉

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