The Rich Man's Journey: A tale of Adventure and Friendship
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'The Rich Man's Journey: A tale of Adventure and Friendship was written by Alison Pitt. This is a storybook story about a man, a lonely man named Edward Theodore Marmaduke de'Casagrande, who was very rich as well. Edward did have friends when he was known as Eddie Bighouse but Edward changed with money. Edward builds a mode of travel, leaves a letter and begins a journey of self-discovery. The pictures throughout the storybook were quite imaginative with a lot of blues and greens. Alison Pitt also wrote this book as a way in helping others and yourself to bring understanding to how you live now and how you lived your past life.
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