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The Lost Umbrella

Some things are meant to find their way back.

By hasnain khanPublished 6 months ago 2 min read
The Lost Umbrella
Photo by Md Samir Sayek on Unsplash

It was the kind of rainy Tuesday that made the city feel like it was shrinking. Umbrellas bobbed along the sidewalks like oversized mushrooms, and the sky was the color of dishwater. Maya didn’t mind the rain — she liked how it gave people permission to slow down, even if just a little.

She was already late for work when she noticed it — a red umbrella, perfectly upright, leaning against the side of the bus stop bench. It wasn’t cheap or broken. In fact, it looked brand new, with a carved wooden handle and clean fabric that shimmered under the drizzle.

She glanced around. No one seemed to be searching for it. Everyone had already moved on, swallowed by the rhythm of city life. Maya picked it up, half expecting someone to yell after her, but no voice came. So she took it with her.

That evening, she placed it by the door of her tiny apartment. "I’ll leave it out for a few days,” she muttered to herself. “If no one claims it, maybe it’s mine now.”

The days passed, and the umbrella stayed. She started using it on her walks to work. It felt strange at first — like borrowing something too personal — but over time, she got used to its comfortable grip and generous canopy.

One morning, as she waited for her coffee, the barista pointed and said, “That’s a beautiful umbrella.”

Maya smiled. “It found me.”

A week later, a small note appeared on the bulletin board at the bus stop. It was handwritten, with slightly shaky letters:

“If anyone found a red umbrella at this stop last Tuesday, it belonged to my late wife. She always left it there while she waited for me. I lost it while visiting her grave. Please return it if found. — James”

Maya froze.

Her chest tightened as she reread the message. Suddenly, the umbrella felt heavier in her hand.

She didn’t sleep well that night. The umbrella stood in the corner, quietly accusing her. She kept imagining James — an old man, maybe — staring at empty space where something meaningful once waited for him.

The next morning, Maya returned to the bus stop. She didn’t leave the umbrella there. She waited.

And waited.

After two hours, she saw him — a man in his seventies, maybe older. He walked slowly, his eyes scanning the ground like he’d lost something important.

She stood and walked toward him.

“James?” she asked.

He looked up, startled. Then he saw the umbrella in her hand. His eyes welled up.

“You found it,” he whispered.

Maya held it out to him. “I didn’t know it had meaning. I thought someone forgot it. I’m sorry I didn’t return it sooner.”

He took it, hands trembling. “My wife and I shared everything. Even umbrellas. She passed last year, but I still take the same route we used to walk together. That umbrella was the last thing she held.”

They stood in silence for a while, under the soft drizzle. Then James smiled.

“Thank you for taking care of it.”

Maya smiled back, a lump in her throat. “She had great taste.”

He laughed softly, and for a moment, the rain didn’t feel so heavy.

That evening, Maya walked home without an umbrella. But somehow, she didn’t feel wet. She felt lighter.

Some things weren’t meant to be kept. Some things were meant to find their way home.

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  • hasnain khan (Author)6 months ago

    very nice story

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