Fluttering,
hovering little birds
perching too.
__________
Hummingbirds
hovering
hunting
however
homeward.
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Mark Graham
I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.
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Snicket #9
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Fear of a Black Hat
Fear of a Black Hat, a Rusty Cundieff film, is one of my all-time favorite movies when I need to laugh. We’re talking Kentucky-Fried Movie territory. You want the uncut version, otherwise you don’t get the Ice Froggy Frog video (below) at the beginning or the discussion about artistic integrity in Cleveland. I own the cut version (😥)—couldn’t find the uncut version at that time, no extra money for it right now, but you aren’t me, so buy the uncut version.
By Harper Lewis5 days ago in Critique
Comments (6)
that's really incredibly beautiful. Unfortunately for me, I've never seen a hummingbird in person.
So beautiful. I love all birds but the humming bird is my 1st love
Nicely done, Mark.
Nice! Well Done!
Great!💕💗
The way you explore themes of memory, fleeting moments, and the fragile beauty of life really struck a chord with me. The hummingbird itself serves as such a powerful metaphor for how we often chase after the briefest of connections, only to realize how precious those moments truly are.