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The Family

haiku

By Mark GrahamPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Family is

caring and loving persons

always together.

(Another haiku for analysis and I think I am improving even just a little bit. I know that I need work. Does anybody know a good book on how to write these poems better. Let me know if possible. Thank you.)

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Muraliabout a year ago

    Superb!!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Well done.

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Feedback requested: I was told 5, 7, 5 syllables. Could add my, our, most - are My friend with a masters in poetry said, once we get the format we can change anything. She was letting me know she could change anything but I needed to get the format first.😉😊💕 Nice work Mark!❤️🥰

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