The Declaration of Independence by Thomas Jefferson (and others)
Critique
By Jazzy Published 2 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by John Bakator on Unsplash
A nation tired of the King across the sea. A tea party in his honor in Boston Harbor, and shots heard around the world, for a war that would put brother against brother, for loyalty to a crown or treason. This document declared above all, that this tyranny cannot stand.
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Comments (6)
Wonderful! I’d never think to critique the declaration. Tyranny cannot stand. 👏🏼
You never disappoint with your unique takes on this challenge! I loved this!
MOST DEFINITELY!!
Brother against brother-yes. Hit the nail on the head
Excellent critique
You really thought outside of the box! This is great.