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The Declaration of Independence by Thomas Jefferson (and others)

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By Jazzy Published 2 years ago 1 min read
The Declaration of Independence by Thomas Jefferson (and others)
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A nation tired of the King across the sea. A tea party in his honor in Boston Harbor, and shots heard around the world, for a war that would put brother against brother, for loyalty to a crown or treason. This document declared above all, that this tyranny cannot stand.

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Jazzy

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Head of the Jazzy Writers Association (JWA) in partnership with the Vocal HWA chapter.

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  • Test2 years ago

    Wonderful! I’d never think to critique the declaration. Tyranny cannot stand. 👏🏼

  • You never disappoint with your unique takes on this challenge! I loved this!

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    MOST DEFINITELY!!

  • Sid Aaron Hirji2 years ago

    Brother against brother-yes. Hit the nail on the head

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    Excellent critique

  • RP2 years ago

    You really thought outside of the box! This is great.

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