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The Curtain

a drabble

By Mark GrahamPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Curtain (pexels.com)

Hello there. I am a beige curtain hanging from a window that has shutters on the outside. I believe the window is open, but there is not a draft to be felt. Oh, so I like to wave in the wind. It is such a nice feeling, and it shakes off the dust that accumulates so fast. I thought that shutters would keep some of the dust outside. Hey, I am right here, and I try but when I am open how I am supposed to do what you want. Cut me a break. Maybe they will shut me nightly.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Love the anthropomorphic approach

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    I agree with Murali, Nice!!💗

  • Muraliabout a year ago

    Nice!!

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