He's a work of art, but only on the surface. Deep down, where nobody can see, he's horrid and rotten. His portrait knows and reflects his sins back to him. What would our portraits look like? Dorian's story certainly makes us wonder. But blissful ignorance helps us sleep at night.
About the Creator
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I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖
Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH7 days ago in Critique
Countdown to Pearl Harbor: The Twelve Days To The Attack
Countdown to Pearl Harbor: The Twelve Days To The Attack by Steve Twomey I really wasn’t expecting much of this read; I grabbed it while I was at Pearl Harbor because how could I not get a book while I was there?
By Matthew J. Fromm5 days ago in Critique
Comments (6)
Marvelous critique! This is one that has been on my reading list for ages.
I was about to say spot on, but Dana stole it. So...this is an awesome critique, Brin. You captured everything about this tale.
I agree with ema - your critique is spot on and lovely written!
Ooooo, I gotta get my hands on this! Excellent review!
intriguing
Great little critique! Thank you for writing it!