House of Night Marked What Could Have Been Different
Critiquing Chapter 1.
In the world of Zoey Redbird everything wasn't what she thought. But then a Vampyre tracker comes to her school marking her. She didn't have the support of her parents. So she drives to her grandmothers Lavender farm.
Zoey has supportive friends, and she fights the darks inside of her.
About the Creator
Emily Curry (Rising Phoenix)
Author, blogger, and in 7 months I will be a mom.
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Excellent storytelling
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Oooo, this was really intriguing! Excellent review!