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Hot and Humid

haiku

By Mark GrahamPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Hot and humid day

In Louisiana, again

When will it get cold.

(Here is another try at my writing a haiku. I think it is a little better. I do want all the suggestions I can get to help me improve in writing this kind of poem. I would really appreciate any help.)

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Long, lazy, sweltering hot days in the south.....

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    I use my fingers to count syllables as I go. It helps. Then I suggest putting your haikus in the poetry community. You are a poet😉🥰

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