
Sun (pexels.com)
Hot and humid day
In Louisiana, again
When will it get cold.
(Here is another try at my writing a haiku. I think it is a little better. I do want all the suggestions I can get to help me improve in writing this kind of poem. I would really appreciate any help.)
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Mark Graham
I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.



Comments (2)
Long, lazy, sweltering hot days in the south.....
I use my fingers to count syllables as I go. It helps. Then I suggest putting your haikus in the poetry community. You are a poet😉🥰