Fluffing hell, Jeff.
They rejected my 2nd entry. Flash Fiction, Raymond G. Taylor prompt.
"Oh, Jeff... I love you too... but...", they disallowed by 2nd entry.
"But why"?
"It may have been a bit risqué, slightly indecent, funny, but not really liable to shock, especially maybe, could have been a tad suggestive".
"What the...ok! But, what did you say that was so bad"?
"I spoke of stabbing and a bit of the size of the sword, er...suggestively".
"Seriously! I have seen worse, and they ok'ed it".
"Strange how they took two seconds to reject, but very rarely take the time to bestow some winnings and some top stories my way". ☺️☺️
"Ha ha ha. So true".
"Are you participating, supporting other writers and contributing to the platform overall. That is important towards gaining benefits".
"I started out very optimistic, now I feel a bit deflated, very few people take the time to interact. I am so grateful to the wonderful creators who have kept my spirit up. Thank you so much".
"Don't give up, I am here for you. I will help you find your path".
"☺Oh, I do so love you Jeff".
"I love you too AD".
Hugs.☺️
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Finally, Jeff gets some love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Antoni De'Leon
Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).
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You crack me up with your truths and you are not afraid to use it. truth is not taken kindly to on here. Still, do your thing, speak your speak. So happy for ole Jeff.
Loved it! So infused with "Vocal" truth! Lol And you were able to bring out the humanity in Jeff! You're a miracle worker and a force to be reckoned with Antoni! Lol 😂💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾
Oh Jeff, it was my word count and choice of community/hence the rejected entry. Ok. I am so relieved. I learned something.
Hahahahahahahaha Jeff is finally loved!