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When the Hit Man Starts Talking

The Truth Always Has a Price

By Pir Ashfaq AhmadPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

When the Hit Man Starts Talking

They say silence is golden—especially in the business of death. For over twenty years, Vincent “Vin” Marchello lived in the shadows, his name whispered only in the underworld’s darkest corners. He was a phantom, a ghost with a pistol, a contract killer whose success was measured not in money, but in how little anyone knew about him. But all ghosts, it seems, want to be remembered.

Vin started talking on a Tuesday. The kind of day when clouds hung low, pressing the city down with their weight. He walked into the downtown precinct with nothing but a brown coat, a silver flask, and a confession that would shake the foundations of everything the city thought it knew.

“I’ve got something to say,” he told the desk sergeant. “And I don’t want a lawyer.”

They put him in Interview Room 3, a small space with stained walls and a two-way mirror. The room had held liars, drunks, and monsters—but none quite like Vin. Detective Claire Harlow, who’d been chasing ghosts for most of her career, was called in.

She looked at the man sitting calmly at the metal table. Mid-fifties. Greying hair slicked back. Sharp eyes that had clearly seen too much.

“You got a name?” she asked, recorder clicking on.

“Vin Marchello,” he said, as if that name shouldn’t send a chill down the spine of anyone familiar with organized crime in the tri-state area.

Claire didn’t blink. “What are you here for?”

“I want to tell you about the things I’ve done. Not for a deal. Not for forgiveness. Just so someone knows.”

And he did.

He talked about 1998, the first time he pulled the trigger for money. A rival enforcer who had gotten sloppy. Vin had followed him for three days. No rush, no mistakes. “I was more patient than anyone else,” he said. “That’s why I lived this long.”

He described the way it became routine. Contracts delivered through code names, payments wired through shell companies. He’d flown across the country with nothing but a change of clothes and a picture in his wallet. The faces he ended became ghosts in his dreams—never asking why, never getting a chance to plead.

Claire listened. At first with suspicion, then with grim curiosity. Every story he told matched cold cases—unsolved murders that had baffled investigators for years. The body in the Hudson. The drive-by in Jersey. The woman found in a Vegas hotel room, posed like she was sleeping.

“Why now?” she asked him after five hours.

Vin leaned back, sipping from his now-cold coffee. “Because I’m dying,” he said simply. “Lung cancer. Stage four. You don’t walk away from that, detective.”

Claire crossed her arms. “So this is about penance?”

“No,” he said, “this is about truth. People think they understand this world—crime, justice, loyalty—but they don’t. They think hit men are heartless, that we’re made of steel. But most of us… we’re just men who got lost somewhere along the way. And we kept walking.”

The recordings continued for days. Vin gave names, addresses, motives. He talked about the guilt, the nightmares, the moment he realized that even killers can break inside.

One night, after a particularly long session, Claire asked him, “Do you ever feel sorry for them? The ones you killed?”

He didn’t answer right away.

“I don’t know what feeling sorry looks like anymore,” he finally said. “But I see their faces when I close my eyes. That must mean something.”

Vin died three weeks later in a prison hospital ward. No family visited. No obituary ran. But because of his confession, thirteen murder cases were closed. Three crime families collapsed. Dozens of lives were changed.

And yet, for Claire, it wasn’t just about justice.

It was about the story. The idea that even a man who had made a career out of ending lives could want to be heard before his own ended. That even a hit man—if only once—could choose truth over silence.

Because sometimes, when the hit man starts talking, the world finally starts listening.

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About the Creator

Pir Ashfaq Ahmad

Writer | Storyteller | Dreamer

In short, Emily Carter has rediscovered herself, through life's struggles, loss, and becoming.

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