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The Warden’s Secret

Redemption in the Ashes

By Said HameedPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

Warden Elias Thorn was a man of order. At Cold Hollow Penitentiary, where snow clung to the razor-wire fences like stubborn ghosts and the wind whispered secrets through cracked stone walls, nothing happened without his knowledge—or so it was believed.

He walked the prison with the gait of a soldier, boots striking the concrete floors in a rhythm that echoed fear and control. Inmates fell silent at his approach. Guards straightened their backs. His icy blue eyes could see through lies, or so the legend went, and in a place like Cold Hollow, lies were currency.

But beneath the Warden's composed exterior, there lived a secret that threatened to thaw the ice he had built around his life.

Every night at exactly 1:13 a.m., Warden Thorn entered the restricted wing—Block E, condemned years ago after a fire gutted half its cells. No inmates remained. It was a hollow ruin of iron and ash. Yet each night, he locked himself inside.

Only one man dared to follow.

Officer Jared Macklin, young and ambitious, had noticed the pattern. He was new, but not naive. The Warden’s nightly visits defied logic. No patrols. No inspections scheduled. No maintenance required. Just silence. Macklin’s curiosity burned brighter each night, and finally, on a moonless Tuesday, he followed.

Cloaked in darkness, he crept down the corridor, boots soft against the floor. The door to Block E was cracked, just slightly. Peering in, he saw the Warden kneeling on the cold floor of Cell 33, facing the wall.

The cell was bare, but the Warden whispered.

“I’m here… again. I’m sorry.”

Macklin strained to hear more, but the voice was soft, trembling with something raw—regret? Grief?

Then, without warning, the Warden turned.

“Who’s there?”

Macklin froze. His heart thundered in his chest, and before he could retreat, the beam of a flashlight hit his face.

“Officer Macklin,” the Warden said, stepping forward slowly. “Curiosity is dangerous here.”

“I—I didn’t mean to intrude, sir. I just… I saw you come in here every night. I had to know why.”

The Warden studied him, eyes narrowed, jaw tense. Then, with a sigh, he said, “Come in, if you’re brave enough to know the truth.”

Inside the cell, the air was colder. Macklin’s breath fogged. The Warden pointed to the wall.

“There used to be a mural here,” he said. “Painted by a young inmate. Julian Black. Nineteen years old. Sentenced to life for a robbery gone wrong. But he wasn’t a killer. The system made a mistake.”

Macklin stared at the blackened wall, charred from the fire. There was nothing left of a mural, just flakes of soot and shadow.

“He was quiet. Kind. Painted hope where there was none,” the Warden continued. “Told me he saw light in people, even in me.”

“What happened to him?” Macklin asked, though he already knew.

“The fire,” Thorn said softly. “Started in the kitchen, spread fast. Evacuation was chaos. I had the chance to save him… but I hesitated. I was supposed to get the guards out. Orders first. Always orders.”

He looked at Macklin, voice brittle. “He screamed my name.”

Silence settled between them, heavier than the prison walls.

“I come here every night to tell him I remember,” Thorn said. “Because forgetting would be the final betrayal.”

Macklin shifted, unsure what to say. The Warden of Cold Hollow, feared by all, was haunted not by ghosts but by guilt.

“You were just doing your duty,” Macklin offered.

Thorn shook his head. “Duty isn’t an excuse to abandon humanity.”

For a moment, the wind howled through the broken windows like distant cries. The Warden closed his eyes.

“I’ve ordered this wing to remain condemned. Not because it’s unsafe. But because it’s a tomb—for him, and for the man I used to be.”

Macklin looked again at the wall, and in the faint beam of the flashlight, he thought he saw a shimmer—an outline of color beneath the char, as if the mural still breathed in memory.

“Why tell me this?” he asked.

“Because secrets fester. And I need someone to remember him… in case I forget.”

Macklin nodded, something shifting inside him. Not just sympathy, but understanding. In Cold Hollow, they were all prisoners in some way.

They left the cell in silence. The door to Block E closed with a metallic groan.

The next night, Macklin returned—not to spy, but to kneel beside the Warden.

He brought a paintbrush.

And the first stroke of color touched the wall again.

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