The Silent Passenger
Not everyone who smiles is safe—and not every hero is who they seem to be.
The rumors started quietly at first—whispers online, social media posts, and news articles talking about a so-called “Train Killer.” A shadowy figure who stalked passengers during late-night commutes, leaving terror in their wake. Most people thought it was just another urban legend or a twisted story made up for clicks. But sometimes, rumors are rootd in truth.
I didn’t think much of it when I boarded the train that night. I had seen headlines about the Train Killer trending on Google, but I figured it was nothing. People love to make up horror stories and scare themselves for fun. Sitting alone, I tried my best to ignore the two women across from me who were gossiping about the case.
They were excited, whispering and grinning like it was all just a game. I rolled my eyes and turned away from them. That’s when I noticed him—a handsome man sitting a few seats down, buried deep in a novel. He looked peaceful, completely absorbed in his book. It was comforting to see someone enjoying a quiet read amid all the noise.
The train ride was long, but I had a movie downloaded on my phone. I popped in my headphones and let the story on the screen pull me in. Time passed quickly, and when I looked up, the two women were gone. Or so I thought.
Suddenly, I felt a tight grip on my arm. I looked up, startled, and there they were—standing right in front of me. The blonde held my arm, her face still smiling, and the brunette raised a syringe in her hand.
Before I could scream, the blonde’s hands were around my throat. Panic rushed through me as the needle moved closer. But then, out of nowhere, the man with the book appeared and slammed into both women, knocking them back. The syringe clattered to the floor.
“Call 911,” he said quickly, standing between me and the two would-be attackers.
I called the police with shaking fingers. The women didn’t try to run; they were too stunned, their eyes locked on the man who had stopped them. When the train stopped, officers were already waiting. The women were arrested, fighting back as they were dragged off.
“That was a close one,” the man said, turning to me. “I’m sorry you went through that.”
He introduced himself as Marcus, and I thanked him for saving my life. He even offered to walk me home, worried that I’d be too shaken to go alone. I agreed, touched by his kindness.
We walked together in silence, the night cool and quiet. He walked just ahead of me, glancing back every so often to check on me.
He didn’t know I was smiling—not out of relief, but something else.
I reached into my purse and pulled out my own syringe, fingers trembling in anticipation. I couldn’t believe those two women had tried to steal my spotlight. Copycat killers, trying to mimic my work. Pathetic. The thrill, the adrenaline of taking a life—it was mine, not theirs.
I stared at the back of Marcus’s neck as we walked. He thought he saved me. But really, he had just brought me closer to my next kill.
And this time, no one would stop me.
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