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The Silent House

Some crimes hide not in the dark — but in silence.

By Ghanni malikPublished 3 months ago 4 min read

1. The Arrival

Detective Mark Bennett had seen dozens of murder scenes in his career, but something about the old house on Wren Street felt different.

The place wasn’t on any police record.

No one owned it officially.

Yet, last night, the neighbors had reported screams coming from inside.

Mark parked his car near the gate.

The grass was overgrown, the air heavy with dust.

As he entered, his partner Lisa Carter looked uneasy.

“It feels wrong,” she whispered.

“Places like this always do,” Mark replied.

The front door creaked open on its own. The smell of damp wood filled the air.

2. The House

Inside, the house looked frozen in time — like someone had left in a hurry.

A dining table stood in the center with three plates of rotten food.

Old photos hung crooked on the walls.

Each photo showed the same family — a man, woman, and a young boy.

Mark picked one frame up.

“This photo says 1986… but look at the wallpaper — it’s still the same.”

Lisa nodded.

“Maybe someone still lives here.”

Then they heard it — footsteps upstairs.

Mark raised his gun.

The stairs groaned under their feet as they climbed.

But when they reached the top, there was no one there — only a long hallway and four doors.

One of them was slightly open, with faint light coming from inside.

3. The Room Upstairs

They entered the room slowly.

It was a child’s bedroom — tiny bed, broken toys, faded blue walls.

But what caught Mark’s attention was the message written on the wall in red paint:

“DON’T WAKE HIM.”

Lisa whispered, “Who’s him?”

Suddenly, a soft music box began to play from under the bed — a slow, haunting tune.

Mark bent down and found a small wooden box with initials carved into it:

T.H.

Inside the box were old teeth — human teeth, small, like a child’s.

Lisa gasped and backed away.

“This is not just a murder house, Mark. This is something else.”

4. The Hidden Room

They searched the rest of the floor but found nothing.

As they turned to leave, Mark noticed a faint draft — coming from behind a wardrobe.

He moved it aside and found a narrow door hidden behind the wall.

“Someone didn’t want this found,” he muttered.

They pushed it open and entered a dark, narrow passage.

It led to a small hidden room, lit only by a hanging bulb.

Inside, there was a metal chair, ropes, and a table full of old surgical tools.

And on the wall — newspaper clippings about missing children from the 1980s.

Each clipping had the same note written in pen:

“The doctor never fails.”

Lisa covered her mouth.

“Mark… this was a torture room.”

5. The Discovery

Mark called the station to run a background check.

A few minutes later, the radio cracked with static.

The officer on the other side said,

“Detective, that house belonged to a Dr. Harold Thompson, missing since 1987. He was under investigation for illegal experiments.”

Before Mark could reply, the lights flickered — and then went out.

The air turned cold.

A faint whisper filled the room.

“You shouldn’t have come here…”

Lisa froze.

“Mark, did you hear that?”

A shadow passed across the wall.

Then, from the corner of the room, a tall figure appeared — pale, thin, wearing an old doctor’s coat, face half hidden in the dark.

Mark aimed his gun.

“Police! Show me your hands!”

But the figure didn’t move.

He just tilted his head — and smiled.

The light flickered again — and he vanished.

6. The Tape

Trying to stay calm, Mark searched the table and found an old cassette recorder.

He pressed play.

A man’s voice spoke — cold and steady.

“Day twelve. The boy doesn’t scream anymore. He listens now. He’s learning to be quiet.”

“The others failed. But this one will not fail.”

The recording ended with the same haunting music box tune they’d heard earlier.

Lisa whispered,

“That voice… was it the doctor?”

Mark nodded slowly.

“And maybe he never left.”

7. The Final Clue

Before leaving, they took the recorder and the wooden box as evidence.

As they walked out, Mark noticed something he hadn’t before — a photo frame near the door, covered in dust.

He wiped it clean.

The picture showed Dr. Harold Thompson — the same man from the shadow —

standing with a smiling little boy.

And next to them…

a young man who looked exactly like Mark.

His hands shook.

“No… that’s not possible.”

Lisa looked at him.

“Mark… you said you were adopted, right?”

He stared at the photo, silent.

The name written on the back said:

“Harold and Mark Thompson — 1986.”

The same initials carved on the box: T.H.

8. The Ending

Mark returned home that night, unable to sleep.

The photo burned in his mind.

Had he really been that boy?

Was that the reason the case had found him — not the other way around?

As he sat in the dark, the faint tune of the music box began playing somewhere in the house.

He stood up slowly.

The sound was coming from his bedroom.

He opened the door — and there, on his desk, was the same wooden box.

Open.

Empty.

And written on a piece of paper inside were the words:

“Welcome home, son.”

The lights flickered — and the screen of his phone lit up by itself.

An unknown number flashed across it:

DR. HAROLD THOMPSON

💀 Ending Line:

Some crimes never die —

they just wait for family to come back.

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About the Creator

Ghanni malik

I’m a storyteller who loves exploring the mysteries of human emotions — from kindness and courage to fear and the unknown. Through my words, I aim to touch hearts, spark thoughts, and leave readers with a feeling they can’t easily forget.

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