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Secrets in the Smoke

Unburying the Past in Flames

By Said HameedPublished 7 months ago 4 min read

The fire started with a whisper.

It crept from the base of the hill like a sleeping beast stirred awake, fed by dry grass and the relentless summer wind. By the time Marla saw the first flicker of orange from her kitchen window, it had already painted half the sky with smoke.

She didn’t panic. Fires were common here, in this sunbaked town tucked against the edge of nowhere. The hills burned like clockwork every few years, cleansing the land, reminding everyone of nature’s quiet rage. But this fire was different.

Because it was heading straight for the old Branwen house.

The Branwen place had been abandoned for over twenty years—long enough for ivy to smother the windows and rust to eat the wrought iron fence. People told stories about that house. That’s where Helena Branwen vanished. That’s where her husband, Tom, was last seen wandering through the fog, clothes torn and eyes wild, whispering nonsense to the sheriff before disappearing himself.

Marla had been twelve then, old enough to understand fear, too young to understand its source. The town agreed on one thing: something terrible had happened in that house. No one said exactly what, but even now, adults spoke of it only when drunk or angry.

As smoke swirled into the valley, Marla found herself slipping on her boots, grabbing a flashlight and scarf, and stepping outside. The fire hadn't reached the house yet. But the wind was shifting, and the smoke rolled thick and low like a rising tide.

She didn’t know why she was going. Only that she had to.

The road to the Branwen house twisted through dying pines and brittle brush. Marla walked fast. The air burned her lungs. Ash clung to her skin. Still, she pressed on.

The house stood at the end of the path, solemn and skeletal. The flames had not yet touched it, but the smoke curled around its base like a living thing, clawing at the porch, climbing the eaves.

Marla hesitated only a second before stepping through the gate.

Inside, the air was colder. The smoke didn’t swirl here; it hovered, unmoving, suspended in pockets as if caught between seconds. Her flashlight cut narrow tunnels through the gray, but shadows pressed close.

She found herself in the parlor first—familiar despite the years. The cracked portrait of Helena still hung above the fireplace. She looked serene, beautiful. But her painted eyes seemed to follow Marla’s every step.

As she passed, the smoke thickened, and something moved.

Marla froze. A figure, faint as breath, stood by the window. She couldn’t see its face—just the shape, blurred and indistinct, like it was made of mist and memory.

“Who’s there?” she called, her voice swallowed by the house.

The figure turned slightly, and a whisper drifted through the smoke.

“You came back.”

Marla’s heart thudded. “Helena?”

The name tasted strange on her tongue.

The figure tilted its head. “You remember.”

And suddenly, she did.

The sleepovers. The laughter. Helena teaching her how to braid marigolds into her hair. How she’d hidden in the attic the night Helena disappeared—woken by shouting, then silence, then a scream.

But she had forgotten.

Not by choice.

“You made me forget,” she whispered. Her knees felt weak. The air was too thick now, not with smoke—but with memories.

“We hid the truth,” the figure said, voice like dry leaves. “To protect you.”

The living room shifted. Marla blinked, and it wasn’t decayed and empty anymore. It was full of life—flickering candles, warm rugs, Helena at the piano, playing that tune she always hummed when the storm rolled in.

Then: the door slammed open. Tom, eyes wild, a book in his hand. Pages scorched. Blood on his shirt.

“You shouldn’t have read it!” Helena had cried.

But he had. He had found the Branwen Grimoire, passed down for centuries. It held secrets the family had buried: spells that bent time, that pierced veils, that erased.

Marla had seen it all. She had watched as Helena and Tom fought, as fire spilled from their hands, as the book burst into flames and the room exploded into darkness.

And then… silence.

The town believed they vanished. But they hadn’t. Not really.

“I’m so sorry,” Marla said aloud now, tears mixing with ash on her cheeks.

Helena stepped forward. Smoke curled where her feet should be. “There’s still time. The fire can set us free. But you have to choose.”

“Choose what?”

“Let it burn.”

The house groaned. The fire was here now—real flames licked the walls, danced across the old rugs. But Helena didn’t flee.

“This place holds the spell. The forgetting. If it burns, so does the lie.”

Marla hesitated. She could turn back. She could leave the past sealed.

But lies are smoke. They choke. They cloud. Only truth clears the air.

She nodded.

Marla stepped outside as the fire took hold. The house roared behind her, a pyre for all the secrets it had kept.

As it burned, the smoke shifted. Not black and choking now—but pale, rising clean into the night sky. And with it, shadows unwound and voices stilled.

In the silence that followed, Marla felt something lift from her. A weight she hadn’t known she carried.

The next day, the Branwen house was gone.

But for the first time in decades, the valley smelled only of ash—and clarity.

And in the distance, wind chimes rang where no house stood, playing a tune she once knew by heart.

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