Room 348: Death at the Inn. - CH # 2
A Chilling Tale of Death and Deception

A “Natural-Causes Thing”
The taking after morning, Susie Fleniken called Greg’s office. Spouse and spouse ordinarily talked each morning, but he hadn’t called. He wasn’t replying his phone. When he fizzled to turn up at the office, two of his co-workers drove over to the inn and thumped on his door.
There was no reply, so they got the inn director to open it. Their frightened calls brought an emergency vehicle and the Beaumont police. They found a middle-aged man dead on the floor covering, inclined and multiplied over, a went through cigarette measured gently between two solid fingers of his cleared out hand. Room 348 was stuffy and uncommonly warm. The man’s skin color had gone grayish blue. There was a damp spot at the groin of his blue night wear, but that wasn’t unusual.
Detective Scott Apple appeared up a small more than an hour afterward. He is a brief and exceptionally fit man with graying hair that he wears combed straight up in spikes. He is all cop. His spouse had been a cop; he met her on the work. He was one of the assault-team pioneers on the department’s SWAT group. He is one of those men who never halt working.
But there was small here to intrigued him. No sign of a break-in or battle. Nothing exasperates in the room. No blood or self-evident wounds. Fleniken’s wallet was still in the back stash of his pants and had a stack of $100 bills in it, so theft wasn’t an issue. Those remaining in adjacent rooms had listened nothing. As Apple addressed the neighbors, he told them it was likely a “natural-causes thing.” Pitiful. He jabbed around Fleniken’s packs, looking for the most part for pills—some clue to his collapse. There were none. Susie and Michael afterward told him that Greg never went to a specialist. He was a persistently autonomous man, suspicious of specialist and unaffected by the advanced energy for wellbeing and wellness. He did not work out. He had chain-smoked his whole grown-up life and had the annoying hack to demonstrate it. He not one or the other drank nor ate to overabundance, but did both openly. It was simple to conclude that his choices had basically caught up with him. Susie was prepared to accept it. She was stunned and grief-stricken but she acknowledged that, for Greg, sudden passing was a plausibility. In reality, she took a few comfort in it. He had checked out on his possess terms. Numerous times she had listened him comment, upon hearing of someone’s biting the dust abruptly, “Lucky charlatan. That’s how I need to go.” And so he had.
At the lodging, the police saw the passing as schedule. A picture taker snapped pictures to make a record of the scene, and the body was driven by a transport benefit to the Jefferson District therapeutic inspector for an post-mortem examination. The as it were secret here showed up to be restorative, and it was likely a minor secret at that.
Dr. Tommy Brown had a time-tested strategy. It took him 45 minutes to conduct a after death exam, reviewing a body interior and out, measuring and weighing organs, all the whereas depicting what he found and noticing the measurements that fleshed out the official frame. He was all business—crisp, effective, and certain. Brown was lean and bare on beat and had a splash of rowdy white hair on the sides that gave off a mad-scientist vibe. He did everything quick; he indeed talked quick. He was a nearby character, portion of the legitimate scene in Jefferson District, and a regarded one. Where passing was concerned, in this corner of Texas, Dr. Tommy Brown’s word was law.
The circumstances of Greg Fleniken’s passing, as detailed, were unremarkable. On the table some time recently him was a 55-year-old Caucasian male who showed up to be in not too bad shape. After deliberate assessment, the as it were marks Brown found on the body were a one-inch scraped spot on his cleared out cheek, where his confront had hit the carpet, and, inquisitively, a half-inch slash of his scrotum. This was curiously. The pillage itself was swollen and discolored, and around the wound was a little sum of edema liquid. The bruising had spread up through the crotch zone and over the right hip. Something had hit him hard.
The story his body told developed more interesting. When Brown opened the front of the middle he found a astounding sum of blood and broad inner harm. A certain sum of mostly processed nourishment had been torn from his guts. The specialist found little gashes there, and on the stomach and liver, as well as two broken ribs and a gap in the right chamber of his heart.
The condition of his internal parts reflected extreme injury: Fleniken had been beaten to passing, or pulverized. Brown concluded that the wound to his private parts likely had been caused by a difficult kick. He had too taken a blow to the chest so extreme it had caused deadly harm. He would have drained out in less than 30 seconds.
On the official shape, another to “Manner of Death,” Brown composed, “Homicide.”
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Comments (3)
The chapter's exploration of injury and violence captures the shocking brutality behind the death.
What begins as a presumed natural death becomes an intense exploration of trauma and potential foul play.
This chapter masterfully builds suspense as a seemingly ordinary death transforms into a perplexing mystery.