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Chapter 3

By Stieve FernandezPublished 4 years ago 3 min read
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Kash sat quietly staring out the passenger window. He was stuck in a state of deep thought as the traversed the journey toward their home state. Moving to the USA was a dream come true for him yet, he couldn’t help feeling like he was still controlled by the life he’d left behind in Jamaica.
He was responsible for several murders prior to his being given a visa by the mayor of his town as a reward for the most high profile killing he had completed.
The mayor had gotten himself involved in a loan sharking operation ran by a group of Norwegian expats and somehow it had led to a falling out amongst his (the mayors) political party. Most notably between the mayor and the number one contender for his position an up and coming politician by the name of Peter Beck.
Being quite outspoken, beck had garnered significant support for the ousting of the current mayor. This created an air of animosity amongst the supporters of the current mayor and those who opposed. As is normal in the political circles in Jamaica most politicians have on their payroll gang leaders locally known as dons. Who, would use force and threats of violence and or death to control the direction of votes and support. A quick call to a certain don known as Malta, led to and eradication of the up and coming Peter Beck.
The don had made arrangements for them to receive visas as part payment for the job upon successful completion. Before long Kash had found himself on a flight to Florida.
In the US he was taken by the contacts of the don back home to a drug house, where, he was at first tasked with guarding the location and its operators. After several months he was moved to Texas and after some time brought to Connecticut.
He had been living in Connecticut since and was pretty much an employee of the gang back home in Jamaica though he was given some room to maneuver on his own.
The local boy of Jamaican descent slowly became his friends and eventually he and Tommy and ratty became a thing. They went everywhere together.
While for tommy and ratty it was a joy to be acting out and proving themselves as tough guys, for Kash there was no option! His was a life of perpetual servitude, and eventually a violent death.
Many a time he would ask the other two why they didn’t go to college get themselves right but was constantly provided the same answer. “We wanna come up like you did!” he would tell them they were idiots but left it at that.
As the trees went by in the shadows he wished he could simply disappear. Start a new life and just be an average Joe. He reached over to the backseat to collect a flask bottle being passed by ratty behind him. “Good looking!” he said as he accepted the flask.
Tommy smoking leisurely, speeding down the lonely stretch of highway attempt to ash the blunt out his window. As he does the gusty wind knocked the hot ash and a few stray embers into his face some landing in his eye. “Oh fuck!” he screamed as he panicked and making a split second reaction he attempted to brush the embers and ash from his face which caused the steering to veer sending the car slamming into the back of a disabled rig at the side of the road.
A huge inferno ensued which engulfed the car and the rear end of the semi. Inside the raging inferno a voice could be heard screaming in a heart wrenching, stomach churning tone of desperation! The flames burned brightly illuminating the darkness of the countryside and consuming the entire body of the car.

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Stieve Fernandez

Hello am a 36 year old Jamaican national three years into my journey of creative writing

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