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Freeze Queeny!!!!!

For the love of the chase.

By Dawn McWhorter Published 4 years ago 3 min read

After the smoke begins to settle down, and the last clicks of the metal cuffs lock shut. My heart feels like it will beat right out of my chest. My thoughts are racing so fast I can’t even begin to understand what just happened to my life. The very short ride to town seems strangely long this time. It’s almost as if time has slowed to a complete stop. As we pull up to that famous big door. The real fear and panic start to grip my soul.

Once the car pulls all the way inside the sally port. The last glimpse of the outside world fades away into cold grayish bricks. As officers secured their weapons the true story starts to unfold. I get walked down a long cold hallway that seems to go on forever. The sounds of people yelling, screaming , and fighting but mostly crying and so much more fill my ears. The last metal lock sounds and the door opens into a small room. With a small metal bench in front of a small desk with another officer sitting there.

The normal’s called him Artie, I just wanted to call my husband. Oh crap they have him too, now what do I do? Artie followed jail protocol start’s asking me for all my information and medical history. So I very rudely started to answer his questions. With so much hate and anger like he caused all this to happen to me. Just then the locked door opens again and there he was the infamous Bill Freeze.

I get brought down another hallway past two cell doors that smell worse than death. The office door is propped open as he sat in his chair waiting for me. For his next chance to put me away for life this time around.

Of course Queeny has no filter and is straight out of the East side projects. Knowing my mouth always gets me into trouble. I open my mouth and started to laughing like I was crazy and then I popped off with… “well well well we met again Mr.Freeze! He is not laughing or finding me funny at all. In his stearin cop voice he snapped back at me SIT DOWN AND SHUT UP!!! So I do very quickly as he giggles too himself then looks right at me and asks how I am doing? Trying not to freak out on him I say well considering I’m sitting in front of you in cuffs again. I can honestly say I have been better staring at my cuffed hands.

After all the questions have still not been answered by either of us. I look at Mr. Freeze and whisper check and mate. I finally win, I really win this one. I just know I will be going home today. Luck and fate our both on Queeny’s side today. With karma waiting around the next turn. Waiting to kick Queeny right in her own face. Knowing this is far from the last time we will meet like this. Queeny smiles and begins to walk out of the jail. She hears them words of fate call out after her… Queeny oh Queeny, Just remember I will come for you and when I get you Queeny. Mark my words Queeny, I will get you. I will lock you up and throw away the key! Queeny just smiles and giggled looking back over her shoulder taunting that cop like she always did. Queeny tells him I look forward to our next chance run in. Till then better luck next time copper.

By Dawn McWhorter

investigation

About the Creator

Dawn McWhorter

loving life starting over from scratch with God as my support.

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