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Finch and Thorne vs. "The Sculptor."

Finch and Thorne's first job together.

By MPublished 11 months ago 3 min read
Finch and Thorne vs. "The Sculptor."
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Rain lashed against the windows of the precinct, mirroring the storm brewing inside Detective Inspector Alistair Finch. Three bodies in as many weeks, each a young woman, each drained of blood, each found posed in a theatrical tableau. The press had already christened him “The Sculptor,” and Finch felt the weight of their morbid fascination pressing down on him.

He’d exhausted every lead, every piece of forensic evidence led to a dead end. Desperate, he'd reluctantly agreed to consult Elias Thorne, a man who made his living reading minds. Finch, a man of science and logic, found the entire idea ludicrous. But the alternative was letting the Sculptor claim another victim.

Thorne was an unassuming man, more librarian than mentalist. Thin, with spectacles perched on his nose, he sat calmly amidst the organized chaos of Finch’s office. "Tell me about the victims, Inspector," Thorne said, his voice quiet and even. "Anything that stood out to you, anything you felt, not just what you saw."

Finch sighed. This was going to be a waste of time. But he started. He described the first victim, Emily Carter, a dancer found posed as a fallen angel in an abandoned theater. Then Sarah Jenkins, a violinist, arranged to resemble a broken doll in a music shop. Finally, Lisa O’Connell, a painter, depicted as a weeping muse amidst the canvases of her studio.

As Finch spoke, Thorne closed his eyes, his brow furrowed in concentration. He remained silent for a long time, the only sound the drumming rain. Then, he spoke, his voice barely a whisper. "He sees himself as an artist...a curator. He's not just killing; he's creating. These women...they aren't victims, Inspector. They're exhibits."

Finch scoffed. "That's just profiling, Thorne, nothing you couldn't get from a textbook."

"Perhaps," Thorne conceded. "But there's something else...a deep-seated resentment. Not towards women in general, but towards...recognition. He feels overlooked, unappreciated." He paused. "He was close to one of the women. Not romantically, but professionally. He believes she stole something from him...an idea, perhaps a chance."

Finch rubbed his temples. "Close to one of the victims? That narrows it down to…dozens."

Thorne shook his head. "It wasn't something obvious. It was subtle, a feeling. He felt…mocked by her success." He opened his eyes, his gaze fixed on Finch. "The painter, Lisa O’Connell. Think about her circle. Who would have felt belittled by her talent, her acclaim?"

Finch thought back to the files. O’Connell's studio was filled with critiques, accolades. Then, a name flashed in his mind: Arthur Bellwether, a struggling artist who often assisted Lisa with her larger pieces. He’d even painted backgrounds on a few of her more famous works. The police hadn’t considered him a suspect; he was quiet, unassuming, invisible. Just like Thorne.

Finch dispatched a team to Bellwether's apartment. They found him surrounded by sketches, not of his own art, but of the crime scenes, meticulously drawn down to the smallest detail. He'd even sketched Lisa as the weeping muse, days before her body was discovered. In a hidden compartment, they discovered a vial of a potent muscle relaxant, the same one used to incapacitate the victims before draining them of their blood.

Bellwether confessed everything. He'd felt overshadowed by Lisa's talent, consumed by envy. He saw himself as the true artist, the one deserving of recognition. He had planned each murder with meticulous care, crafting his grotesque masterpieces.

Back at the precinct, Finch sat across from Thorne, the rain finally subsiding. He didn't understand how Thorne had done it. But he’d done it. “How…?” Finch began, but stopped, unsure what to ask.

Thorne smiled faintly. "I merely listened, Inspector. Not just to your words, but to the echoes they left behind. The Sculptor left a trail of emotion, of resentment, as palpable as any fingerprint. I simply followed it."

Finch didn't fully believe in Thorne's "mentalist" abilities. But he couldn’t deny the results. He knew one thing for sure - he'd never look at art the same way again. The Sculptor was behind bars, his macabre art silenced. And for the first time in weeks, Alistair Finch felt a flicker of something akin to peace. He just hoped the echoes wouldn't linger too long.

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