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A Bullet for Every Lie

Justice Wears a Badge, but Carries Six Truths in Lead

By Said HameedPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

The desert sun beat down like a punishment from the gods. Sand twisted in the wind, whispering secrets long buried. Marshal Elias Thorne rode slow, his duster billowing behind him, silver badge catching sunlight like a mirror to the past. The town of Redemption lay ahead, brittle and sunburnt, its wooden bones creaking in the wind.

He wasn’t there for peace.

Thorne carried a revolver. Six chambers. Six bullets. But these weren’t just any bullets—each one carved with a name. Not of men, but of lies.

He’d made them himself, back in the hills of Coldwater Gulch, where the silence taught him truth. Each lie he’d been fed, each betrayal disguised in smooth words and hollow promises, now had a bullet. Not for revenge—no. Thorne didn’t believe in that. This was justice. Personal, final, and cold as the iron he carried.

The first name: “He’s your friend.”

That lie had cost him Jed, the only brother he’d ever known, betrayed by a man with a silver tongue and a priest’s smile. Now that preacher, Calver, ran the church in Redemption. It stood tall in the center of town, whitewashed like the soul he pretended to have.

Thorne tied his horse outside the saloon, stepped onto the boardwalk, boots heavy with dust and consequence. People turned. They always did. Some recognized the coat, others the walk. Most just saw the badge and prayed it wasn’t them he’d come for.

He pushed through the batwing doors. Inside, smoke and silence danced together.

Behind the bar stood a man Thorne hadn’t seen in years—Reuben Hart, once a Pinkerton, now just another drunk with a past. Thorne laid a bullet on the bar.

“Remember this one?” he asked.

Reuben picked it up. Eyes narrowed at the etching: “He’s clean.” A lie Reuben had sworn about a judge who’d hanged an innocent boy. Reuben’s lie had bought him a bottle and cost a life.

Thorne said nothing more. He didn’t need to.

Reuben nodded once and stepped aside.

Thorne holstered the bullet. Not yet. Maybe Reuben had one last truth left in him.

Outside, church bells rang. Calver’s voice boomed through the streets like thunder dressed in scripture. Thorne followed it, each step a hammer strike in his chest.

He pushed open the chapel doors.

Calver froze mid-sermon.

The crowd turned.

“Marshal,” Calver said, voice oily with false hospitality. “Come to be saved?”

Thorne raised the gun.

“I came to finish what your lie started.”

He pulled the trigger.

Bang.

The bullet carved “He’s your friend” flew true, striking Calver square in the chest. He collapsed, gasping scripture as blood bloomed across his robes.

Gasps. Screams. Silence.

Thorne turned and walked out.

That was one.

He didn’t rest. Redemption wasn’t cleansed by a single death. There were still five lies to bury.

Next was Kate Monroe.

The lie: “I love you.”

It had been whispered in the dark, warm and soft like a lullaby. Then she took his badge, his maps, and left him bleeding in the dirt outside Carson Ridge. She’d married rich and cruel, a railroad baron named Finch who now ran the north side of town like a private kingdom.

Thorne found her on the veranda of the Finch estate, sipping tea like poison.

She didn’t run. She smirked.

“I always said you were too romantic,” she said.

Thorne showed her the bullet.

She read the inscription. Laughed. “You still believe in justice, Elias? That’s your greatest lie.”

He raised the gun.

Bang.

The bullet tore through porcelain and heart in one smooth motion.

That was two.

Three: “We’re the good guys.”

He found Sheriff Mallory in the jailhouse, polishing his badge. The man looked up, recognition dawning like a slow storm.

“You were one of us,” Mallory said, rising.

“No. I was never one of you.”

The bullet didn’t wait for protest.

Four: “This will end the war.”

A lie spoken by a general who traded towns for treaties and lives for headlines. Thorne tracked him to the train station, now old and forgotten. He didn’t resist. Just nodded, as if he too had been waiting.

Bang.

Five: “He died a hero.”

That lie etched deepest of all. His father, thrown under the wheels of history, branded a traitor to cover another man’s failure. Thorne didn’t speak as he laid that final bullet into the chamber.

The man responsible was already dying in a hospital bed, breathing through tubes and memory.

Still, Thorne fired.

Bang.

Six bullets. Six lies.

The revolver hung heavy on his hip, empty now. The silence that followed was not peace, but absence. No more lies. No more truth to carve. Just wind and sand and the long shadow of a man who had nothing left to kill.

Elias Thorne rode out of Redemption with the sun at his back and ghosts in his wake.

In the end, it wasn’t about vengeance.

It was about balance.

And sometimes, justice comes one bullet at a time.

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