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The last minute

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By Loveness MongwePublished about a year ago 4 min read
The last minute
Photo by Kenny Eliason on Unsplash

6:59 PM

Anna sat alone at a small table in the corner of the café, her hands trembling slightly as they rested on a well-worn envelope. The café was quiet at this hour, with only a few patrons scattered around, lost in their own worlds. The ambient warmth of the place seemed to contrast sharply with the storm brewing inside her. Outside, the sky had darkened, and the first raindrops tapped gently against the window.

She glanced at the clock on the wall, its second hand creeping closer to the top of the hour. The letter before her was the culmination of months of thought and emotional turmoil—a letter she had labored over, rewriting it countless times, trying to find the right words to convey everything she felt.

Anna's mind raced as she thought about what had led her here. Three years ago, a bitter argument had driven a wedge between her and her brother, Max. Their once-close relationship had soured into silence, each holding on to their own version of events and grievances. Anna had hoped that this letter would be a way to bridge that gap, to make amends and offer an olive branch.

The clock’s second hand ticked closer to 7:00 PM. Anna took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. The letter was meant to be a final attempt at reconciliation, a gesture that she hoped would prompt a conversation between them, if not a full resolution.

Just then, the café’s door chimed softly, breaking the oppressive silence. Anna’s gaze flicked up from the letter, and her breath caught in her throat. The figure that entered was unmistakable—Max. His once-familiar face now carried lines of worry and exhaustion. He scanned the room, his eyes landing on Anna with a mixture of surprise and hesitance.

Max walked over, his steps deliberate but tentative. “Anna?” he said, his voice a mixture of disbelief and cautious hope. “I didn’t expect to see you here.”

Anna’s throat tightened, and she struggled to find her voice. “Max… I wasn’t sure if you’d come.”

Max’s eyes fell on the envelope on the table, its edges frayed from repeated handling. “What’s this?” he asked, curiosity mingled with the old tension that had once defined their interactions.

Anna’s fingers brushed against the envelope as she tried to steady her nerves. “It’s a letter. I’ve been meaning to reach out for a long time. I wanted to explain… everything.”

Max’s gaze softened as he looked at her, searching for signs of the sister he once knew. “Anna, is everything alright? You look… I don’t know. Like you’re carrying a heavy burden.”

The weight of her emotions was nearly overwhelming. Anna’s eyes filled with tears, but she blinked them away. “It’s just that I’ve been holding onto so much anger and regret. I wanted to write everything down, to put my feelings into words, but… maybe it’s better if I just tell you.”

Max’s expression shifted, a mix of concern and empathy. He hesitated for a moment, then gently took the envelope and opened it. As he began to read, his face went through a spectrum of emotions—surprise, sadness, and finally a deep, aching understanding.

Anna watched him, her heart in her throat. She wanted to explain everything, to convey the depth of her remorse and the desire to mend what had been broken. But the clock was ticking, and she felt as though time itself was urging them to confront their past.

6:59:45 PM

As Max finished reading, he looked up at Anna, his eyes brimming with emotion. “Anna, I… I had no idea you felt this way. I’m so sorry too. I’ve missed you. I didn’t know how to reach out, and I guess I thought you didn’t want to talk to me.”

Anna’s eyes met his, and the dam of her emotions finally broke. “I’ve been afraid too. Afraid that it was too late, that you wouldn’t want to hear me out. But I needed you to know how much I regret what happened.”

Max reached across the table, taking her hand in his. The touch was gentle but firm, and it felt like a lifeline. “I regret it too. We both let our pride get in the way. I’ve been waiting for the right time to make things right, but I see now that it’s not about waiting. It’s about making a choice.”

7:00 PM

The clock struck seven, and the café’s soft lights seemed to dim slightly, casting a peaceful glow over the two siblings. In that single minute, amidst the clinking of cups and the distant murmur of conversations, a profound shift occurred. The unresolved anger and regret that had built up over the years seemed to dissipate, replaced by a tentative but genuine sense of connection.

Anna and Max shared a long, heartfelt look, their eyes conveying what words could not. The letter, once a symbol of their fractured relationship, had served its purpose. It had opened the door to a new beginning.

As they sat there, hand in hand, the rain outside intensified, but inside, the storm of their past had calmed. They had taken the first step towards healing, and though the path ahead was uncertain, it was a path they were now willing to walk together.

End.

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  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Interesting

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