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Mark and Jake full story

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By salamanPublished 3 years ago 3 min read
Mark and Jake full story

Here's a longer example of a man vs man story:

Mark and Jake had been best friends since childhood. They grew up together in a small town, spending their days exploring the nearby woods and dreaming of bigger things. As they got older, their friendship remained strong, but their paths began to diverge. Mark became a successful businessman, while Jake struggled to make ends meet as a carpenter.

Despite their different levels of success, Mark and Jake remained close. They would often get together for drinks and reminisce about old times. However, there was always an underlying tension between them, as Jake felt resentful of Mark's wealth and success.

One day, Mark came to Jake with a business proposition. He had acquired a large tract of land outside of town and wanted to build a luxury resort there. He asked Jake to be the lead contractor on the project, promising him a significant cut of the profits.

Jake was initially hesitant, knowing that the project would take a lot of time and effort. However, the prospect of finally achieving financial stability was too tempting to resist. He agreed to the project, and the two men began working together to make it a reality.

As construction began, tensions between Mark and Jake began to mount. Mark had strong opinions about how the resort should be built and what materials should be used, but Jake disagreed with many of his decisions. Jake felt that Mark was being too cheap and cutting corners, while Mark felt that Jake was being too stubborn and wasteful.

Their disagreements soon turned into arguments, with both men becoming increasingly hostile towards each other. Jake resented Mark's micromanaging and felt that he was not being properly compensated for his work, while Mark felt that Jake was not meeting his expectations and was causing unnecessary delays.

As the project dragged on, both men became more and more entrenched in their positions. They began to see each other as enemies, rather than friends, and their working relationship became increasingly toxic. The stress of the project began to take a toll on their personal lives, as well, with both men neglecting their families and other responsibilities in order to focus on the resort.

Finally, the resort was completed, and Mark and Jake met to divide up the profits. However, instead of celebrating their success, the two men got into a heated argument over how much each of them deserved. Jake felt that he had done most of the work and should be compensated accordingly, while Mark felt that he had put up most of the money and should get the lion's share of the profits.

The argument quickly turned physical, with both men lashing out at each other in anger. They rolled around on the ground, throwing punches and kicks, until they were both exhausted and bruised. Finally, they collapsed on the ground, panting and bleeding, and realized the true cost of their rivalry.

As they lay there, Mark and Jake reflected on what they had lost in their pursuit of success. They had sacrificed their friendship, their health, and their happiness for a project that had ultimately left them both feeling empty and unfulfilled. They realized that their rivalry had been fueled by envy and greed, and that they had lost sight of what was truly important in life.

In the end, Mark and Jake parted ways, both feeling disillusioned and defeated. They knew that they could never go back to the way things had been before, but they also knew that they needed to move on from their bitter rivalry. They both learned a valuable lesson about the dangers of competition and the importance of maintaining healthy relationships, and vowed to never let their ambition come at the cost of their happiness and well-being

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  • salaman (Author)3 years ago

    nice story

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