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CLOSING MY DOOR

REVOLVING LOVE

By Shanell BrownPublished 4 years ago Updated 4 years ago 1 min read
CLOSING MY DOOR
Photo by Dima Pechurin on Unsplash

I WANTED YOU EVER SINCE THAT NIGHT.

I WAS GLAD WHEN YOU ASKED ME TO BE YOUR WIFE.

WHEN I LOOKED INTO YOUR EYES, IT WAS FATE.

MY HEART WAS EMPTY, BUT WITH YOU IN MY LIFE! I WAS SAFE.

MY WORLD CHANGED THAT DAY LIKE A REVOLVING DOOR, I MUST SAY.

THAT KEY I GAVE YOU TO MY HEART.

LOCK ME IN A DARK PLACE RIGHT FROM THE START.

FROM VISIONS OF HAPPINESS TO A DEEP PLACE OF SORROW.

CRYING THOSE TEARS LIKE IT WAS NO TOMORROW.

WAS I A FOOL TO LET YOU IN MY DOOR SO FAST?

I COULD'VE BEEN BITTER BY THINKING IT WASN'T GONNA LAST.

I WAS A WOMAN LOOKING FOR LOVE IN ALL THE WRONG PLACES.

MAYBE IT'S A MIND GAME, AND NOW I'M SEEING DIFFERENT FACES.

WAS I DREAMING MY SOULMATE, WAS YOU? MAYBE MY HEART THOUGHT OUR LOVE WAS SOLID AND TRUE.

WHAT IS MY HEART SAYING? I CAN'T TAKE IT NO MORE.

I MADE UP MY MIND NOW IT WAS TIME TO LET GO.

SEE YOU, MY LOVE, NO HARD FEELINGS.

I THANK YOU FOR SHOWING ME LOVE EVEN IF MY HEART IS NOT WILLING.

I LOVE YOU THEN AND FOREVER MORE

BUT NOW IT TO CLOSE MY REVOLVING DOOR.

Teenage years

About the Creator

Shanell Brown

Hello, my name is SHANELL but as a writer I'M Beatrice. Beatrice is the little girl inside me that's been through pain that made her heartless and rude. BEATRICE has No understanding.

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