Confessions logo

A Love That Found Its Way

Two Souls, One Journey Through Rain and Time

By Bari Mir RahamatulPublished 9 months ago 4 min read
A Love That Found Its Way

There are stories that make you a believer in destiny, and there are stories that leave you wondering if love really is the biggest mystery of all. Ours was one such story.

It was a rainy evening when I first saw her, although I had no clue then how my life would never remain the same. I was on my way home from the office, drenched in the rain, frustrated at the lack of taxis. That's when I saw her. She was under the awning of a small café, staring out into the rain with a faraway expression. I noticed her despite not looking. There was something about her pose, the way she was lost in her daydream, that commanded attention. She appeared to hold a secret that the world couldn't quite understand.

I sought shelter under the umbrella of a tree nearby, trying to keep myself dry in the rain, but I could not help but keep gazing at her. It was not that she was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen—no, it was more than that. She had something about her, a quiet elegance, something that made me feel like I was seeing her for the first time in my life, even though we were strangers.

The wind wailed, and a gust of rain hit her. She flinched but instead of seeking refuge inside the café, she stepped into the rain, letting the water soak her. I couldn't help myself—I went over to her.

"Hey," I said softly. She faced me, her expression unreadable. "You'll get ill. Want me to call a taxi for you?"

She simply stared at me for a second, and I wondered if I had overstepped. Then, however, a small smile tugged at her lips. Not a thank-you smile or a courtesy smile. A smile that indicated she understood me in a way that made it feel as if we'd shared a lot of moments, which we hadn't.

"I’m fine," she replied with a quiet voice, almost as if she were speaking more to herself than to me.

There was something so alluring about her calmness, the manner in which she was so comfortable with herself despite the rain. We stood for a moment, and then, as if by unspoken agreement, she stepped back into the café, inviting me to do the same. She didn't speak again, but I did.

In, the café smelled of freshly brewed coffee, warm pastry, and rain-wet soil. The cozy atmosphere wrapped around me like a blanket, and I discovered that, for the first time in a long while, I was at ease.

She was sitting at a table near the window, gazing out into the rain with the same far-off expression. I hesitated for a moment, then went over to her. "Do you come here often?" I asked, more out of politeness than curiosity.

She turned to me, her eyes warm. "I do," she said, her voice low. "It's the one place where I can actually think."

Her words hung in the air for a moment, and I was aware of their weight. There was more to her, a stillness that intrigued me. I did not ask her what she was thinking. Some things are better left unsaid.

I did order a coffee, though, and sat opposite her. The talk was effortless, as though we'd known one another for years, not minutes. She spoke about her work, her love of painting, her lifelong desire to travel the world. I listened, entranced by the sound of her voice, the sparkle in her eyes when she discussed her dreams.

I shared my own stories—with her my love of music, my dreams of writing a novel, and how, sometimes, I lost myself in the chaos of life. She smiled, and her eyes gentled. "You should write," she stated simply. "You have the kind of soul that must."

That simple statement remained with me long after we separated. I did not know why it affected me so deeply, but it did. She had a capacity for being heard that I was not familiar with before. And something within me moved in that moment. I realized that I had been so occupied with listening to the noise of life that I had forgotten to hear the quieter parts of myself.

Days turned into weeks, and I caught myself thinking about her increasingly. Her face, her voice, her gentle smile—all of it lingered with me. It wasn't obsession—it was different. It was a craving for connection, for insight, for something deeper than the surface-level connection I had with the world.

We continued meeting, though our conversations turned into more than idle chatter. We talked about our fears, our dreams, our pasts. I learned she had endured heartbreak, as had I. I learned she, too, had once been lost, unsure of who she was or where she was going. But now she had entered into a peace with herself that I coveted. She was brave in a way I did not know until I met her.

The longer I was with her, the more I realized she wasn't a moment. She was something I had been searching for, something I didn't even know I needed. Being with her was home—a home I had been trying to find my entire life, and now I had it.

One evening, as we were walking in the park after a rain shower, I stopped and turned to her. The wind was cool, the earth smelled of rain, and everything was still, as if the world itself had paused for a moment.

"I think I'm falling in love with you," I said to her, my voice trembling slightly, uncertain if I was ready to say it.

She stopped and faced me, her eyes locking with mine. She said nothing for a moment, just looked at me as if she was trying to decide something. Then she smiled—a warm smile and more.

"I've been falling for you too," she said softly.

And in that moment, everything was alright. The rain, the storm, the uncertainty—it was all gone. We were two humans, strolling together in the quiet after the storm, realizing we had stumbled upon something beautiful. Something wonderful.

DatingEmbarrassmentFriendshipSecretsTeenage years

About the Creator

Bari Mir Rahamatul

Turning ideas into stories, and stories into impact.

Exploring the edges of technology, creativity, and online income—one word at a time.

Guides, insights, and ideas designed to educate, motivate, and inspire you can be found here.

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment

    Find us on social media

    Miscellaneous links

    • Explore
    • Contact
    • Privacy Policy
    • Terms of Use
    • Support

    © 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.