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Veil of the Firstborn Part 2

Whispers Beneath the Ash

By Richard BaileyPublished 8 months ago Updated 7 months ago 5 min read

The light devoured everything for a moment. Vaelin squinted against the searing brightness, his body tense, sword ready. When the glare finally receded, he found himself standing at the mouth of a vast underground chamber, carved out by no hands he could recognize. The stone was smooth but unnatural, flowing as if it had melted and solidified again in twisting shapes. Vines clung to the walls like veins, pulsing faintly with some sickly inner light.

Elira stepped in behind him, her expression unreadable, her fingers brushing lightly over the handle of her dagger. The doorway behind them had already sealed, cutting off the ruined city and leaving them in a heavy, humming silence.

“Tell me this was your plan all along,” Vaelin said, voice low and dry.

Elira gave him a sideways glance, her smirk small but real. “Of course. Leap blindly into ancient cursed vaults? Exactly how I planned to spend my afternoon.”

Before Vaelin could answer, the ground beneath their boots vibrated with a slow, rhythmic thrum, like the heartbeat of something massive slumbering beneath the stone. The sound wasn’t natural—it dragged against their senses, pulling at their bones. It was the same pull Elira had felt in the ruins above, but stronger now. Intimate.

At the center of the cavern stood a figure.

It wasn’t Hollowborn—this thing was solid, regal even, draped in layers of ancient cloth and armor that shimmered with the faint imprint of soul-magic. Its helmet was shaped like a bird’s skull, elongated and cruel, with a crest that splayed into burning feathers made of spectral flame.

It lifted its hand toward them, not to attack, but to beckon.

Vaelin instinctively stepped in front of Elira. She sighed and leaned slightly to the side to see past him. "You know," she muttered, "sometimes I'm the one they want."

"You’re welcome," Vaelin replied without turning.

The figure spoke then—not with a voice, but with thought, pressed straight into their minds. The words were raw, grating against the edges of memory.

Flameheart. You have returned.

Elira’s breath caught audibly. Her knees buckled for a split second before she locked herself upright again. Her face had gone pale, but her eyes burned brighter.

Vaelin didn't lower his sword. “She’s not your anything.”

The spectral figure tilted its head, the flames of its helm flickering.

Bound by oath. Forged by fire. Sealed by betrayal. She is ours. She is called.

The ground shuddered again. All around them, in the dark recesses of the chamber, other shapes began to stir. Armored figures, hollow-eyed and breathing steam, dragging swords that bled smoke across the stone.

Vaelin tightened his grip on his weapon. "Elira. How much do you want to remember?"

She hesitated. Something inside her stirred—a half-forgotten name, the echo of a promise made under blood-red skies. She shook it off, stepping forward to Vaelin’s side. “Not like this.”

The first of the armored specters charged them, fast and screaming with a soundless rage.

Vaelin moved to meet it, swinging his sword in a brutal arc that deflected the first blow and cracked into the creature’s side. The thing shuddered but didn't fall, pressing forward with terrifying, mechanical persistence.

Elira moved differently. Her magic bloomed from her palms in waves of invisible heat, bending the air around her. She didn't just attack—she pushed at the very core of the specters, tearing at the soul-bond anchoring them to their dead bodies. Threads of light ripped free from the first one, unraveling it into a heap of smoking ash.

The battle grew wild and close. Vaelin fought without rhythm, adapting to the strange speed and resilience of their enemies. He targeted joints, tendons, and where the soul-magic glowed faintly through cracked armor. His blade became a blur of efficient violence.

Elira, meanwhile, was a force of nature. She pulled deeper on her soul-magic, her aura intensifying until she seemed to move half a heartbeat ahead of time, dodging blows that should have cut her down, responding to threats before they fully formed. There was something almost frightening in it—a rawness Vaelin hadn't seen before, like she was slipping out of the woman he knew and into something older.

She sent a blast of magic that collapsed part of the cavern ceiling onto a knot of specters. The sound was deafening, a shockwave of dust and shattered stone.

For a heartbeat, there was stillness.

The figure in the burning helm had not moved. It regarded them as one might watch ants fight on a battlefield, mildly curious.

She cannot deny her bond. The fire will call her home.

The spectral flames around its helm flared outward. The cavern walls shook. From the broken earth, a creature began to rise—something made of molten rock and writhing flame, half formed into the shape of a great bird.

Vaelin swore under his breath, stepping closer to Elira. "You said this wasn't your plan."

She gave him a breathless, feral smile. "Improvising."

The molten creature shrieked as it finished forming. Its wings stretched wide, each beat sending gusts of searing heat rolling through the cavern. It lunged toward them with terrifying speed, a mass of claws, beak, and burning hatred.

Vaelin and Elira exchanged a brief look, unspoken understanding passing between them. They moved together—not with perfection, but with the trust born of battles survived side by side.

Vaelin met the creature head-on, deflecting a swipe meant to shear him in half. His arms trembled from the force, but he held his ground. Elira, circling wide, raised both hands and unleashed a lance of soul-magic so focused it cut a thin line straight through the creature’s wing.

The molten bird shrieked again, but it didn't fall. It split its attention, turning one burning eye on Elira.

It knew her.

And she felt it too—a pull in her bones, a whisper in the back of her mind telling her to submit, to return. She gritted her teeth, refusing. She wasn't a weapon anymore. She was herself. She was—

"Elira!" Vaelin’s shout snapped her back just as a second, smaller specter lunged for her.

Without hesitation, she pulled deep, deeper than before. Her body felt like it was unraveling from the inside, her magic flaring so brightly that it cracked the ground under her boots. With a sharp gesture, she drove the specter into the earth with a crushing force.

Together, they battered the molten bird back, strike after strike, until it faltered. Elira poured the last of her strength into one final blast of soul-magic, a direct shot into its chest.

The creature exploded outward in a brilliant shockwave of flame and smoke.

When the dust cleared, Vaelin was standing over her, chest heaving, blade lowered.

Elira was on one knee, exhausted, her palms smoking from the overuse of her magic.

The figure with the burning helm watched silently. It made no move to attack. Instead, it spoke again, the words cold and certain.

You cannot run from what you are. The fire remembers. The fire waits.

With that, it dissolved into a scatter of burning motes, leaving only the silence and the dark.

Vaelin crouched beside her, offering a hand without saying a word.

Elira took it, her hand trembling slightly in his.

As he pulled her to her feet, he leaned closer, his voice low and steady. "Whatever you are—or were—you’re mine now."

Elira laughed weakly, and it was the most human sound in the entire cavern.

They turned toward the next tunnel, deeper into the dark, where the real answers—and real dangers—waited.

And this time, they went together, without hesitation.

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All Parts of the Series

Veil of the Firstborn Part 1

Veil of the Firstborn Part 2

Veil of the Firstborn Part 3

Veil of the Firstborn Part 4

Veil of the Firstborn Part 5

AdventureFantasyFictionScience Fiction

About the Creator

Richard Bailey

I am currently working on expanding my writing topics and exploring different areas and topics of writing. I have a personal history with a very severe form of treatment-resistant major depressive disorder.

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