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The Town That Disappears Every Night at 10PM

Some places were never meant to be found.

By ElliPublished 6 months ago 6 min read

I never believed in stories like this. You know the ones — strange towns, cursed people, unexplainable rules. I always thought they were written for people who wanted to feel like life had more magic than it really does. But that was before I found Wicklow.

Wicklow isn’t on most maps. It’s one of those towns you only stumble into when you’re not really looking for anything at all. I was on a solo road trip — burnt out from my job, my relationships, and the noise of regular life. My GPS lost signal an hour before I arrived. I only meant to stop for gas and a snack, but when I pulled in, something about the place made me stay.

Wicklow was quiet. Not abandoned, just... still. There were people — kind, polite, almost too polite — and small shops, a bakery, a hardware store, and an inn with an old-fashioned front desk bell. The air smelled faintly like cinnamon, and everyone smiled like they knew a secret they weren’t going to share.

I checked into the inn just before sunset. The woman at the desk, Miss Hattie, handed me a brass key with a crooked number 3 tag.

“You’ll want to be inside before 10,” she said, not looking up from her logbook.

“What happens at 10?” I asked.

She paused, her pen hovering. “Town shuts down.”

That was vague, but I chalked it up to small-town weirdness. I dropped my bags off in the room, then walked down Main Street. There wasn’t much — a diner, a bookstore with no open sign, a florist’s window filled with wilted daisies. It felt timeless, like I had stepped into the background of an old photograph.

At 9:30PM, the town bell rang once. It wasn’t loud — more like a deep chime rolling across the streets. I watched as storefront lights began to flicker off. Doors locked. People disappeared inside. Even the air seemed to still.

By 9:50, the streets were empty.

By 10:00, the town was gone.

I don’t mean quiet. I mean gone.

From my room window, I saw blackness roll over the edge of town like a curtain being drawn. Streetlights blinked out. Buildings faded. Sound disappeared. It wasn’t like nightfall — it was like someone had erased the world outside. Total, echoing silence.

I gripped the window ledge, trying to breathe. What was I seeing?

I backed away from the glass, but even inside the inn, I could feel the emptiness pressing in. I tried my phone — no signal, no internet. I turned on the TV — static. I opened the door to the hallway — pitch black.

Then I heard it: the sound of breathing. Not mine.

Low. Steady. Like something just outside the door. I didn’t open it. I stayed in that room, all night, waiting for morning.

And just like that, at 6:00AM, the light returned. Birds chirped. The town was back. It was as if nothing had happened. People were sweeping their sidewalks, the diner sign lit up, and the bell above the inn’s door jingled with someone’s morning coffee run.

I asked Miss Hattie about it at breakfast.

She stared at me for a long moment. “You stayed up.”

“I didn’t mean to,” I said.

She sighed and poured coffee. “You’re not supposed to stay up.”

“Why does the town disappear?”

“It doesn’t disappear,” she said. “You do.”

I didn’t understand what she meant. But over the next few days, I tried to piece things together. Everyone in Wicklow followed the same schedule. Doors shut by 9:45PM sharp. Lights out. Curtains drawn. No noise, no movement. If anyone knew what happened after 10PM, they wouldn’t talk about it.

I tried leaving once — just before sunset on the fourth day. Packed my bag, started driving out the same road I came in on. But no matter which direction I turned, the road looped back to Wicklow. Like the town didn’t want me to leave.

The fifth night, I made a choice.

I set an alarm for 9:55PM and stayed awake. This time, I turned off the lights but sat near the window, hidden behind the curtain.

At exactly 10PM, it happened again.

The buildings faded, the streets blurred into blackness. But then something changed — the darkness didn’t just erase things. It replaced them.

Shapes moved in the street.

Tall, slow, and not entirely human. They glided more than walked, heads turning as if they were sniffing out sound. Their limbs were too long. Their mouths too wide. They didn’t speak — they hummed. A deep, low hum that vibrated in my chest.

One of them stopped in front of the inn.

It raised its head, sniffed the air, and tilted as if listening.

Then it smiled — straight toward my window.

I fell backward, heart pounding, the curtain fluttering. I didn’t dare move again. The hum outside grew louder. It stayed for hours.

The next morning, I confronted Hattie again.

“You saw it,” she said quietly.

“What are they?”

She glanced around before answering. “We don’t know. But they come every night. If you’re not asleep — if they sense you — they’ll try to pull you in.”

“In to what?”

“No one who’s disappeared has ever come back.”

I wanted to believe she was exaggerating. But I remembered the way that creature smiled — like it recognized me.

That day, I met a man named Elias, an older resident who worked at the bookstore. He spoke quietly, but directly.

“They showed up a few years back,” he said. “At first, people stayed up out of curiosity. Now, we all know better.”

“So the town vanishes because of them?”

“No,” Elias said. “We disappear from the world. They bring us into something else. Wicklow isn’t on maps anymore. You think that’s an accident?”

I asked him why they didn’t just leave the town.

He gave a hollow laugh. “We tried. People drove out. But they ended up right back here — or worse.”

“Worse?”

“Some came back wrong. Quiet. Hollow-eyed. Like someone else was wearing their skin.”

That night, I tried again to stay awake — not to spy, but to test something.

At 9:55PM, I turned on every light in my room. Played music. Opened the window.

When the darkness rolled in, I saw them come faster.

Three of them.

No hesitation. They moved toward the inn like shadows pouring downhill. One of them looked up — its eyes were mirrors. I saw myself in them. Or… almost myself. The reflection smiled even though I wasn’t.

That’s when I heard the door behind me creak open.

But I hadn’t unlocked it.

I ran to slam it shut, heart hammering, but no one was there. Just the hall. Quiet. But changed.

The wallpaper was older. Faded. Dustier. Paint peeling like no one had touched it in decades. My room looked the same, but the rest of the inn… felt like a different time.

In the mirror, I saw something behind me — but when I turned, the room was empty.

I didn't sleep that night. I just sat there, waiting, whispering to myself, trying to stay grounded. I don’t remember when the sun came up — but when it did, everything snapped back to normal.

That was my last night in Wicklow.

Elias met me at the edge of town that morning with a map. A real one — hand drawn.

“This path,” he said, pointing to a faint trail through the woods. “Only shows up after dawn. It’ll take you out. But you have to leave before the bell chimes.”

“Why help me?”

“You’re not meant for this place. Not yet.”

I didn’t ask what he meant.

I followed the path. I didn’t look back. The sun was rising and the trees were gold and whispering.

And I made it out.

I’m writing this now because I don’t think Wicklow lets you go entirely. Sometimes at night, I hear the hum. Sometimes, my street disappears for a moment — just a flicker — like it’s trying to find me again.

If you ever find Wicklow, leave before dark.

And whatever you do, never stay awake past 10PM.

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