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The Hajj: Dust, Blades, and Bare Souls

Part-Four

By Mahdi H. KhanPublished 7 months ago 1 min read

Place: Mina, Saudi Arabia

Time: Day 3 of Hajj, after stoning Jamarat

Under a makeshift tent in Mina’s desert heat:

Men kneel on woven mats, heads bowed.

Women sit in clusters, scarves loosened.

Scissors snip. Razors hum.

Hair falls—curls, braids, gray wisks—into the sand.

A sacred confetti.

The Cut: Two Acts, One Surrender

For Men (Halq):

  • The razor’s cold kiss.
  • Hair drops in dark coils.
    • Scalps emerge: pale, vulnerable, new.
    • A Turkish grandfather shuts his eyes—"Allah accepts, abi."
    • Shedding the armor of ego.

For Women (Taqsir):

  • Scissors whispering at the veil’s edge.

  • A fingertip’s length falls.
  • A Nigerian mother catches a curl: "This held my tears at Arafat."
  • Trimming the weight of hidden struggles.

Why the Blade Matters: Islam’s Mirror

This isn’t about hair.

It’s about returning to your birth-state:

Equality (Quran 49:13):

"No rich, no poor. No scholar, no student. Just atoms of dust and stubble."

Rebirth (Quran 57:20):

"Like seeds stripped bare to grow anew."

Unity (Hadith):

"One Ummah, one heartbeat under God’s sky."

After: The Face You Forgot

A cracked mirror passes hand to hand:

Men: Fingers trace bare scalps—cool wind on skin untouched for decades.

Women: Tucking shortened strands, eyes softer, lighter.

A Somali girl giggles, pointing: "Mama, you look like me now!"

The blades didn’t cut hair. They cut distance:

  • Between you and Allah.
  • Between you and the pilgrim beside you.
  • Between the you who came, and the you reborn.

Hajj’s core echoed in Mina’s dust:

"You arrived as many.

You leave as one."

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Mahdi H. Khan

B.Sc. in Audiology, Speech & Language Therapy

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