
Place: Mina, Saudi Arabia
Time: Day 3 of Hajj, after stoning Jamarat
Under a makeshift tent in Mina’s desert heat:
Men kneel on woven mats, heads bowed.
Women sit in clusters, scarves loosened.
Scissors snip. Razors hum.
Hair falls—curls, braids, gray wisks—into the sand.
A sacred confetti.
The Cut: Two Acts, One Surrender
For Men (Halq):
- The razor’s cold kiss.
- Hair drops in dark coils.
- Scalps emerge: pale, vulnerable, new.
- A Turkish grandfather shuts his eyes—"Allah accepts, abi."
- Shedding the armor of ego.
For Women (Taqsir):
- Scissors whispering at the veil’s edge.
- A fingertip’s length falls.
- A Nigerian mother catches a curl: "This held my tears at Arafat."
- Trimming the weight of hidden struggles.
Why the Blade Matters: Islam’s Mirror
This isn’t about hair.
It’s about returning to your birth-state:
Equality (Quran 49:13):
"No rich, no poor. No scholar, no student. Just atoms of dust and stubble."
Rebirth (Quran 57:20):
"Like seeds stripped bare to grow anew."
Unity (Hadith):
"One Ummah, one heartbeat under God’s sky."
After: The Face You Forgot
A cracked mirror passes hand to hand:
Men: Fingers trace bare scalps—cool wind on skin untouched for decades.
Women: Tucking shortened strands, eyes softer, lighter.
A Somali girl giggles, pointing: "Mama, you look like me now!"
The blades didn’t cut hair. They cut distance:
- Between you and Allah.
- Between you and the pilgrim beside you.
- Between the you who came, and the you reborn.
Hajj’s core echoed in Mina’s dust:
"You arrived as many.
You leave as one."
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Mahdi H. Khan
B.Sc. in Audiology, Speech & Language Therapy
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