The Gravedancer’s Waltz - Part 5
The Final Step

The estate no longer shimmered with illusion, it sagged under its own truth.
What had once been gilded grandeur was now bone and rot, memory stripped of its polish. Faded roses wilted in the garden below, their petals unmoved by wind, for even the air no longer pretended to flow. The sky was not night nor dawn, but something between, a lavender-hued stasis where stars drifted like silt.
The house had come to the edge of its last breath. And it waited.
Vaelin stood on the ballroom’s fractured threshold, watching the wreckage of the night’s echoes slowly dissolve. Masked phantoms, once so vivid, collapsed into dust and scattered like ash into the beams of false dawn.
There was no music. Only silence.
And beneath it, a low hum, waiting.
Elira entered first, her flame-shadow dancing ahead of her like a guardian wraith. Her coat was torn from the previous night’s conjuration, but her posture held regal defiance. The Flamecourt sigil at her throat pulsed dimly, no longer blazing, but still alive. Still hers.
She walked beside Vaelin and said nothing at first. Their silence didn’t need to be broken. It spoke enough.
But behind them, Tovik broke the spell by tripping over a half-collapsed candelabrum and muttering, “I’ve had romantic breakups that hurt less than this house.”
Elira snorted softly.
Vaelin didn’t smile, but he glanced over his shoulder.
“You’re sure this is the end?” she asked.
“No,” Vaelin said. “But it’s where it started.”
He stepped fully into the ballroom. The room responded instantly.
The cracked marble floor knit itself back together with sharp, crystalline sounds. The chandeliers rose, whole again. Red drapes re-stitched themselves and blew inward from a wind that wasn’t there. All around them, the ballroom reconstructed its lie, not for celebration this time, but for conclusion.
The center of the floor bore a mark now. A sigil scorched in black: a tangled knot of oath-runes, Remnant weave, and the seal of House DuMonte.
It wasn’t memory.
It was the origin.
Tovik moved to a high balcony, retrieving a scrollcase that shimmered faintly in the fractured light. “Found this in the rafters. Looks like the original contract that started this whole mess.”
Elira took it from him and unrolled it carefully. Her lips pressed tight as she read.
“It’s not just a contract between the assassin and the noble family,” she said. “It’s a binding. A bloodwritten one. Magic was used to enforce it… and it locked both parties into recurrence. Neither could die. Neither could forgive.”
Vaelin looked at the signature. His name, his old one, was burned into the parchment. Vaelin d’Marrow. Gravedancer of House Thorne.
Not a title.
A claim.
His hand twitched near the shadow-hilt on his belt. Not out of reflex. Out of memory.
Elira touched his arm. “You are not him.”
“But I was,” he murmured. “Somewhere. In some life.”
The moment stretched.
Then the chandeliers ignited. The ballroom grew warm. And the Last Waltz began again.
But this time, no one appeared to dance it.
Instead, the floor darkened and reflected. Not just faces, but truths. Regrets. Lives unlived.
From the glass-like floor rose a single figure.
Vaelin’s face. Aged. Hardened. Wearing armor stitched from silk and shadow. Around his neck hung the broken seal of House Thorne. His eyes glowed faintly violet, the mark of long Remnant possession.
This was no ghost.
This was a possible Vaelin. A future warped by power. A shadow that had won.
“You severed my link to the past,” the echo said softly. “Now you must choose your future.”
He extended a hand.
There was no malice. No challenge.
Only invitation.
Vaelin stepped forward. His boots echoed not on stone, but on memory. Every step a heartbeat. Every heartbeat a decision.
Behind him, Elira readied flame, just in case. But she held.
Tovik unsheathed a slender rapier and whispered, “Just say the word and I’ll ghost this drama queen into next year.”
But Vaelin… accepted the hand.
The ballroom warped.
Suddenly, he stood not across from the echo, but in its place. And the other Vaelin, the dark one, stood in his body.
For a breathless moment, he saw through the shadow’s eyes. The weight of the throne beneath his boots. The obedience of soldiers trained in silence. The memory of killing, not for justice, but for efficiency. The Remnant's voice singing lullabies of supremacy.
And he hated it.
He let go.
Vaelin withdrew from the grasp, and as he did, the binding shattered.
The mirror beneath his feet screamed. Not with sound, but with release. The ballroom splintered into a hundred scenes, moments of regret, joy, blood, and tenderness, and then folded inward, collapsing.
The echo screamed, but it was not a death-cry. It was disappointment.
“I could have made you a god,” it whispered.
“I’d rather be a man,” Vaelin said.
He stepped back into himself.
And the ballroom died.
They emerged into dawn.
Real dawn.
Sunlight touched the estate for the first time in two centuries. The estate, crumbling now without memory to hold it together, shed its illusions like old skin. A garden bloomed. Birds returned.
Vaelin stood in the grass, breathing in the air as though for the first time.
Elira came to his side.
“It’s over,” she said, almost in disbelief.
“I don’t think it ever ends,” Vaelin replied. “But this chapter’s closed.”
Tovik emerged from the ruins carrying a tarnished crown and two bottles of ghost wine. “Who’s in the mood for a drink and light emotional processing?”
Elira laughed.
Vaelin didn’t. But he took the wine.
As they walked into the sunrise, Elira slipped her hand into his.
The Remnant inside him stirred faintly, but not in warning. It was no longer pulling echoes.
It was listening.
Awaiting the next story.
Not one written in blood.
But in choice.
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All Parts of the Series
The Gravedancer's Waltz Part 1
The Gravedancer's Waltz Part 2
The Gravedancer's Waltz Part 3
About the Creator
Richard Bailey
I am currently working on expanding my writing topics and exploring different areas and topics of writing. I have a personal history with a very severe form of treatment-resistant major depressive disorder.




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