
Every winter, the lake near Evelyn’s hometown froze solid. Locals said you could hear whispers under the ice—voices of those who drowned long ago.
When Evelyn returned home after years away, she went skating one night and saw a reflection under the ice that wasn’t hers. She fell through and found herself in an underwater world where time stood still.
The climax: Evelyn met her younger self beneath the ice, trapped by guilt and grief. By forgiving her past, she broke the curse and resurfaced at dawn, gasping for breath as the first light of morning hit the frozen water.



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