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The Final Hour

Chapter 7

By Chamuditha AppuhamyPublished about a year ago 3 min read

The ticking of the pocket watch reverberated in my ears like a countdown to doom. The faint glow from its face lit my trembling hands as I stared up at the towering clocktower. The hands on the massive clock remained frozen at 3:00 AM, a haunting echo of the watch I clutched.

I had less than 15 minutes.

The forest around me seemed to close in, the trees whispering secrets I couldn’t decipher. Shadows danced at the edges of the clearing, and I could feel unseen eyes watching me. My heartbeat quickened, mirroring the relentless ticking of the watch.

“Think!” I muttered to myself. “What does it mean? What am I supposed to do?”

I glanced back at the pocket watch, turning it over in my hand. On its back, something I hadn’t noticed before gleamed faintly in the dim light—a small engraving. Squinting, I read the words aloud:

“Align the times, and the path will reveal itself.”

My eyes darted between the pocket watch and the clocktower. Align the times? The pocket watch was counting down, but the clocktower was stuck. Did I need to match them somehow?

I approached the clocktower, its ancient stone surface cold under my fingertips. A creaking sound made me whip around, but there was no one there. The air was thick with tension, as if the forest itself were holding its breath.

There had to be a way to move the clock. My gaze fell on the base of the tower, where a small, ornate panel was embedded into the stone. It was covered in intricate carvings, but at the center was a keyhole.

The key!

I fumbled in my pocket and pulled out the small key I’d taken from the wooden box in the previous challenge. My hands shook as I slid it into the lock. It fit perfectly.

With a click, the panel swung open, revealing a set of gears and levers inside. The mechanism looked ancient but surprisingly intact. Above the gears was a circular dial with numbers, like a second clock face.

The pocket watch ticked louder in my hand, as if urging me on. The countdown read 7 minutes.

I turned the dial, aligning it with the current time on the pocket watch: 5 minutes, 43 seconds. The gears groaned to life, and the hands on the clocktower began to move, slowly ticking toward 3:00 AM.

The forest trembled.

The ground beneath me shook slightly, and a low rumble echoed through the clearing. The clocktower’s hands clicked into place, aligning perfectly with the pocket watch.

Then, silence.

For a moment, nothing happened. The forest held its breath again. I stood frozen, staring at the tower, waiting for something—anything—to occur.

Suddenly, a beam of light shot from the clocktower’s face, piercing through the forest and illuminating a hidden path. The shadows seemed to recoil from the light, revealing a narrow trail winding deeper into the woods.

“Follow the path,” a voice said, low and gravelly.

I spun around to see the driver standing at the edge of the clearing. His crooked grin was gone, replaced by a cold, serious expression.

“What’s at the end of it?” I demanded, my voice shaking.

“Your answer,” he said simply.

I hesitated, but the ticking of the pocket watch snapped me out of my paralysis. The countdown was still running: 2 minutes, 15 seconds.

I took a deep breath and stepped onto the path. The light from the clocktower guided my way, but with each step, the air grew colder and heavier. The forest seemed alive, the trees whispering louder, their branches reaching toward me like skeletal hands.

At the end of the trail stood a door—a massive, iron door embedded in the trunk of an impossibly large tree. It was engraved with the same pocket watch symbol I’d seen before.

The countdown read 30 seconds.

I pressed my hand against the door, feeling its icy surface. The pocket watch glowed brighter, and the hands stopped ticking, freezing at 0:00.

The door creaked open, revealing nothing but blinding white light.

I hesitated for a split second before stepping through.

As soon as I crossed the threshold, the light consumed me, and the world spun violently. I felt like I was falling, tumbling through time and space. Voices whispered in my ears, fragments of sentences I couldn’t understand.

When the spinning stopped, I found myself back in my bedroom. The pocket watch lay on my desk, its hands frozen at 3:00 AM.

The only sign that it hadn’t been a dream was the note next to the watch:

“Congratulations, player. You survived. For now.”

The sound of a distant engine rumbling outside made me freeze. I peeked out the window, and there it was—the taxi, idling across the street.

Its headlights blinked once, and then it disappeared into the night.

AdventureChildren's FictionEpilogueFantasyFictionHorrorMysteryPlot TwistThriller

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Chamuditha Appuhamy

Hi, I’m Chamuditha Appuhamy—a storyteller exploring ideas that spark curiosity. From tech to life’s small wonders, I share captivating stories to inspire and connect. Let's Explore Together.

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