The Ember and the Crown - Part 4
The Queen in the Mirror

Rain traced silver rivers down the glasswork spires of Drevril’s upper court, the storm cloaking the palace in a veil of soft thunder and distant lightning. Below, within the East Gildhall, laughter spilled through stained crystal like wine from an overfilled goblet—fragrant, rich, and sharp with something spoiled beneath.
Masks and feathers danced in flickering candlelight. Every face was beauty. Every smile a lie.
Tovik Redmire leaned against a marble pillar beside a statue of the first monarch of Drevril, whose name had been scrubbed from records centuries ago. He wore bells at his wrists, a crimson-stitched motley coat, and the faint scent of lavender and ink.
To the revelers, he was merely tonight’s hired fool, a flash of color, a bit of wit, and wine to entertain the elite. But Tovik’s gaze was steady, unblinking, locked on the woman seated near the dais.
Tyssen Valeblair.
Former consort of secrets. Master of the Whisper Guild. His lover once, years ago, before she sold his name for power. Now she sat where power whispered to her instead, leaned close to the false queen with eyes that glittered like poisoned rubies.
The imposter monarch, still wearing the illusion of regal perfection, smiled with teeth too straight, too even. The sigil gleaming at her throat pulsed once—faintly—and Elira’s magic sparked in Tovik’s memory like an old wound rubbed raw.
Above them all, Vaelin moved like dusk in a storm. High in the rafters, where the scent of old oil and rotting dust clung to the beams, he crouched with Remnant eyes open.
Every breath carried memory. Every gust of wind through the broken glass behind him whispered of past blood, oath-broken halls, and secrets still stained into stone. The Remnant coiled within him stirred at the scent of magic—bloodwritten oaths scribed into the walls of the Gildhall itself. Not new magic. Old. Forbidden. Nearly lost.
He whispered the names of the dead to himself, not as prayers, but as armor. Each one a shield. Each one a regret.
Below, Elira moved between dancers, her phoenixblood hidden beneath layers of silk and sigil-stitched illusion. Her dark braid shimmered with embers, her eyes catching the faint golden sheen of bound fire. She wasn’t here for games.
The true queen was trapped, locked not in a cell of stone, but within a mirrored realm of memory folded by sigilcraft, the very kind Elira once helped theorize in the forbidden chapters of the Crimson Library. Her hands itched with the memory of it. Her breath caught every time she passed another noble, unsure if it was glamour or guilt reflected in their gaze.
A break in the music. A shift in the rhythm. The Gildhall's atmosphere thickened.
Tovik spun into the dance, twirling between partners with the grace of a man who’d been born for performance and deception alike. His movements were perfect, each turn, each dip, each playful flick of the wrist. But behind the flourishes lay intent. He was spiraling toward the throne.
Tyssen rose before he reached it. She descended the dais in a wave of emerald and black, her smile as sharp as ever, her heels clicking like the tick of a countdown. They met in the center of the floor, surrounded by silk, perfume, and eyes watching too closely.
“Tovi,” she said smoothly, as if they’d parted hours ago, not years.
“Ty,” he replied with mock delight, bowing low, bells tinkling in protest. “How generous of you to let me perform at your coronation of lies.”
She laughed. Genuinely. “Still bitter. Still brilliant.”
“And you,” he murmured, “still dangerous.”
Her eyes narrowed. “Why come back?”
“To see if the fire burned me, or if I burned it.”
A flicker of something passed between them. Not nostalgia. Not remorse. Something sharper. Older.
In the rafters, Vaelin shifted as a shadow detached from the wall. Kal Mareth.
He moved like a nightmare given form, black plate etched with veins of oathmetal, a remnant of the old Nightblade Circle. The mark on his chest glowed faintly with living bloodscript. Vaelin’s jaw tightened. They had trained together. Bled together. But Kal had sworn to the imposter now, bound by bloodwritten decree.
The Remnant within Vaelin flared with cold recognition. Kal’s soul was frayed. Oath-twisted.
Vaelin dropped silently from the beam as Kal turned. They collided like memories, sharp and deadly. Shadows peeled back in a howl as blades met, steel hissing in the air thick with warded silence.
The Remnant screamed in Vaelin’s ears, showing him fragments of what could have been, a younger Kal, laughing in rain, before the Circle shattered. Vaelin shoved the vision aside.
Steel took precedence now.
Below, Elira found the alcove. The statue of the forgotten queen stood cold and hollow-eyed. Her fingers trembled as she traced the runes etched into its base, runes only a phoenixblood could read fully. Words tied to memory. Names woven into flame. She whispered the phrase: “Fyran’thiel.” A guttural word of the old tongue. The wall behind the statue sighed and slid aside.
A spiral staircase wound downward, its steps made from smoky glass and framed in brass. The mirrored prison had been hidden inside the palace itself, just beneath the place where the first queen had once decreed Drevril’s founding. That was no accident. Whoever forged this trap had wanted irony baked into the architecture.
Elira descended into the heart of memory.
The chamber below shimmered with overlapping realities. Mirrors upon mirrors, infinite reflections, and in the center, bound in a lattice of false flame and illusion, sat the real queen. Her face was gaunt, eyes wide but lucid. She stared at Elira as if she were a memory returning home.
“I remember you,” she said.
Elira raised her sigil-branded hand. “Then hold on.”
Above, the fight exploded into the hall.
Vaelin’s blade tore through Kal’s pauldron, sparks flying, shadows roaring. Kal struck back with a blood-etched blade that sang of oathbreaking and sacrifice. They moved through pillars, across tables, crashing through illusions. Nobles screamed. The court dissolved into chaos.
At the center of it all, Tovik faced Tyssen.
“You ruined me,” he said softly.
“I set you free,” she answered.
“Then let’s see what your freedom costs.”
He pulled free a Whisperknife, etched with stolen memory, and flung it at her feet. The illusion around her rippled. Her mask cracked.
Tyssen’s eyes changed.
Not human.
Not anymore.
And as the sigil at her throat began to burn with stolen flame, Elira rose from the spiral with the true queen at her side, her hands alight with phoenixfire and a memory older than the throne itself.
The hall turned to silence.
And the war for the crown truly began.
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All Parts of the Series
The Ember and the Crown Part 1
The Ember and the Crown Part 2
The Ember and the Crown Part 3
About the Creator
Richard Bailey
I am currently working on expanding my writing topics and exploring different areas and topics of writing. I have a personal history with a very severe form of treatment-resistant major depressive disorder.



Comments (1)
The description of the stormy scene and the complex characters is captivating. Reminds me of the intricate worlds in some of the fantasy novels I've read. Tovik's situation with his former lover adds a layer of drama. Can't wait to see how things play out for these characters.