Blackbird Fly Part Eleven
The Investigation Begins
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The Heartbroken Blackbird
"Please come back," he thought. "Let me out of this cage. Remove these shackles."
TV Night in the Safe House
Jack drew back and became lost in his thoughts as he stared blankly at the TV screen.
In the background, Jack's parents yell out “trash,” “dishwasher.”
Supervisory Special Agent Gordon
- September 9, 1982, Jack received an envelope with the photos and a blackmail note.
- Mitchell Gannon went missing on Wednesday, September 15, 1982.
Agent Gordon decidedly made the call, “Cole you're on AM detail, Forbes you're PM.”
The Gardener
Back at the safe house Jack and Sheryl were in the kitchen preparing lunch for the family.
“Jack, can you get the mayonnaise for me.”
“Alrighty Jack, whatever your heart desires.”
Jack took a look out the window, “Someone is cutting the front lawn.”
Emily scoffed and said, “What a dumb name for a yard service company.”
“Maybe not so dumb Emily,” Sheryl responded, “If you're an FBI agent.”
Sheryl responded, “Mozart's Requiem in D Minor operates on a higher plane than any other.”
With that conversation, Sheryl opened the door and welcomed the young man into the house.
“Please have a seat, Agent Lomeli,” Sheryl directed him toward the sofa where Jack was sitting.
“Yes, that is true. Mitchell wasn't there. His apartment was cordoned off.”
“You said the driver was a ‘he,’ did you see the driver?”
“So, you're not sure who was driving?”
“I am not sure,” Jack answered.
“What time did you arrive at Mitchell's apartment on that day?”
“I arrived there around 11 am.”
“It was shortly after 11:30 am.”
“What time did you make it to the firehouse?”
“It was a few minutes after noon.”
“Thank you, Jack, that's all for today. You've been a big help.”
With Love, RHC 💜🩷💙
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Blackbird Fly Part Ten
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It starts with love.. The Power to the God Of War and Wealth Walk into a Chinese restaurant (even in Oklahoma, USA), a Chinese police station, a kung fu martial arts studio or even a Chinese temple and you often see a red faced warrior holding a heavy quan-do (spear like weapon).
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The beginning of the story got me confused until I learned he was just dreaming. Nicely done with this series
Tiffany never mentioned this undercover job. So much happening, hard to keep up. Twists and turns and mysteries to untangle. Sure hope it all gets sorted out. Written like a pro Rick. Nicely done.
Mystery theater rocks again .💯
Love this, keep up the good work.
Awesome chapter!!! Loved that Tiffany is on the team!!! Waiting for the next one!!!❤️❤️💕
I'm so happy to see the story continue! I am honored to be a part of the investigative team! I have a special place in my heart for little Jack. I would love to help find Xochital and Jack's beloved Angelita. Nicely written chapter! I really enjoyed the music dialogue/secret code section of the story. It was a very nice touch! Great work Cousin! I'm excited to read the next piece of the puzzle! No pressure intended but how soon before we receive the next installment? Lol 😆
I like the main character's attitude toward solving the mystery of missing persons. This is the first story I have read of yours, so I believe I will return and read the others.