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Alone in the Corner

Chapter one

By Karan w. Published 10 months ago 2 min read
Top Story - March 2025

The world was moving forward without a pause, everything changing with time. Each day took on new colors, and every night gave birth to a new memory. For Magnus, the world around him was just the same, beautiful yet equally empty for him. He was in the final phase of his school life, carrying the memories of past years as he stepped into a new school. He had to begin this last chapter all over again.

A week passed by. Everything seemed fine, and he had started adapting to this new school. But he still hadn’t made any friends. He continued to sit alone in a corner.

Every day, he noticed a girl sitting silently in the last corner of the class. No one seemed to pay any attention to her as if she and that corner didn’t even exist. Her eyes remained lost in an unknown void, fixed on an old clock before her. Magnus watched her daily, she never spoke to anyone and disappeared suddenly as soon as school ended.

One day, during lunchtime, Magnus didn't stop walking up to her. The girl looked at him, and in her eyes, he saw a strange glimmer of recognition.

"Hi... I’m Magnus. I just wanted to know why you’re always so quiet and alone? Are you fine?

"I’m waiting…"

"For whom?"

"For you."

As soon as Magnus looked into her eyes, his heartbeat racing fast. He had never met her before, yet her voice felt familiar.

The girl pointed at the clock, "When it reaches zero, I will disappear again… and you will forget me once more.

Before he could grasp the meaning of her words, blurry images flashed through his mind, an ancient world, galloping horses, war, blazing fires… and a promise.

"If there is a next life, I will find you again…"

The girl smiled sadly, You say that in every lifetime, yet I always fade from your memory. You fail every time. But I… I always wait for you somewhere in the world until my existence completely vanishes. I will wait for you.

A tear fell from her eye, and in that drop, Magnus saw only two faces—his and hers, And then she smiled. Memories from centuries past swirled before his eyes.

The girl smiled one last time, and as Magnus watched, the clock’s hands began to move backward. She started dissolving into a mist and then disappeared completely.

Magnus screamed… "Anastasia!"

The next morning, Magnus sat alone in the same corner. His eyes were fixed on the clock's hands. But they did not move backward. The faint flame of hope in his heart flickered… and then went out.

The world was still beautiful, but empty for him.

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A/N:- Thank you so much for reading, Next part is coming soon.

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About the Creator

Karan w.

Writer || Poet || Author

Author of "The Resonance–Two Together-Lost Forever

 All worlds collapse the moment they touch the ground of reality—worlds I once created. Yet I find my bliss in the dissolution of my creations

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  • Colleen Walters9 months ago

    This is so lovely... Someone called me Anastasia out of the clear blue a couple of days ago. I hope that she doesn't have to keep waiting for him ... well done, Sk!

  • Congrats on Top Story! 🎉 Well deserved. Keep up the good work!

  • Samson Murad10 months ago

    very awesome work: I am very inspired by your work

  • ishitaaa10 months ago

    This was really good ❤

  • Pivot Pathways10 months ago

    Hauntingly beautiful—Magnus and Anastasia’s timeless connection really tugs at the heart!

  • Felix Omondi Oduwo10 months ago

    Nice read, I just wrote about something just closely matches yours but mine is a happy ending. you can read from the link https://shopping-feedback.today/motivation/a-love-writen-in-the-stars%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

  • Calvin London10 months ago

    Sk ,you are on a roll - well done on a Top Story. It is easy to see why. Your words express the intense emotion of the meeting. I kept thinking of the movie Ghost. Loved it.

  • Maryam Batool10 months ago

    Congratulations on Top Story... ✨🎉🎉🌿 Now, why would you believe that I was sure it would become a Top Story 😄😆

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    Congrats on the Top Story! Poor Magnus. Will he and Anastasia ever reunite?

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Well written, congrats 👏

  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    The story of an unrequited love and friendship and I hope they see each other again. Will there be more to this story? Good job.

  • Maryam Batool10 months ago

    Oh wow! Would this story turn as I see it? 🙈❤😂 Eagerly waiting for the next part! What is this strange connection between the two? 🤞 Also, Anastasia is one of my fav names 😊

  • Rohitha Lanka10 months ago

    You have written exceptionally this story beautifully captures the emotional journey of transition and lone lines.Magnus' inner world is poignantly conveyed making his struggle with his change relatable.I wish you all the best hope one of post will be top of the table rank,this is a my thought.

  • Oooo, I'm not sure if you've watched the Tamil movie Anegan but your story reminded me of that movie. I can't wait to know what's gonna happen to Magnus and Anastasia!

  • Chaotic Minnie10 months ago

    How do you come up with such stories SK? It stirs up feelings I never had!

  • Marie381Uk 10 months ago

    Wonderful story so well written 🏆✍️♦️♦️♦️

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