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The Golden Hour and the Photographer

As he adjusted the focus, Elliot squeezed his eye against the viewfinder, the subtle aroma of pine and sea tantalizing his nostrils. The seaside cliffs were being painted in shades of honey and fire as the golden hour was just getting started.

By MD SHAMIM RANAPublished 9 months ago 7 min read
The Golden Hour and the Photographer
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As he adjusted the focus, Elliot squeezed his eye against the viewfinder, the subtle aroma of pine and sea tantalizing his nostrils. The seaside cliffs were being painted in shades of honey and fire as the golden hour was just getting started. Waves unfolded like bed linens as the Pacific drew in deep, rhythmic breaths. It was his favorite time of day, when everything seemed to have been caressed by enchantment and shadows stretched like whispers.

He knelt down and took a picture of a wind-blown tree that clung to the cliff's edge, its twisted but undamaged trunk bent. It made him think about perseverance. About his mother, who had brought him up by herself. Of the years when he had wandered from city to city, not knowing where he belonged. Throughout it all, photography has served as his fulcrum, his means of finding calm amidst the upheaval.

A gentle, inquisitive voice said, "Trying to grab the soul of the tree?"

Elliot nearly dropped his camera as he spun abruptly. A woman with a riot of red curls in her hair, backlit by the waning sun, stood a few feet away. Her enormous cardigan fluttered like wings in the wind. She had a sketchpad tucked under her arm and a steaming cup of coffee in one hand.

Elliot straightened up and said, "More like... the light behind it." "But if soul appears, I will take it."

She grinned. "My name is Mara. I recognize you from here.

Elliot blinked. In order to catch the same slant of light, he had been visiting this cliff every Friday for the last two months. It was an exercise in change and recurrence, a personal endeavor. But he hadn’t spotted her.

With a half-wave, he introduced himself as Elliot. "I was unaware that I had company."

Mara's head cocked. Sometimes I come here to draw. I have half of my sketchbooks with the tree.

He examined the pad she was carrying. "Am I able to see?"

After a moment of hesitation, she opened it to reveal a sheet with expressive charcoal lines. Viewed from a different perspective, the tree stood resolutely against a stormy sky. In a way that surprised Elliot, it surged with life.

He whispered, "You gave the impression that it was breathing."

She chuckled quietly. "Trees are living things. simply more slowly than we do.

He was moved by something about her, the way she appeared to be both grounded and fleeting, like the light he sought. That evening, they perched on the edge of the cliff and watched the sun sink into the water, sharing stories in hushed whispers.

Elliot discovered that Mara taught art workshops at the community center and worked as a freelance illustrator. She had spent her entire childhood in Crescent Bay, a tiny beach hamlet. Mara was a lighthouse—steady, bright, and intricately linked to place—in contrast to him, a vagrant with callused feet from chasing sunsets across continents.

Their paths started to cross more purposefully over the next few weeks. Mara would bring her sketchpad, and Elliot his camera. At times, they sat silently while using their various lenses to capture the same environment. At other times, they discussed anything from literature to childhood fantasies, the anguish of loss, and the excitement of creation.

"I never remain anyplace for long," Elliot admitted one late afternoon. However, there is something odd about this place.

Mara gave him an observant smile. "Perhaps it is not the location. Perhaps it is what you discovered within it.

He did not inquire as to her meaning. He was aware already.

Elliot received the email on the third Friday of September.

National Geographic An future trip series has chosen your portfolio contribution. We would like to give you a six-month project covering South American landscapes, beginning in November.

He had once dreamed of this kind of chance. Adventure, prestige, and exposure.

However, he felt an odd weight in his chest as he gazed at the message on his screen. His initial reaction was fear rather than happiness.

He discovered Mara on the precipice that night, with the sky blazing with gold.

His words tasted like ash as he said, "I got an offer." "We traveled for six months. South America.

At first, she remained silent. simply gazed at the horizon.

His voice was raspy as he added, "I am not sure if I should accept it."

Mara faced him. "Why would not you?"

"Due to you," he acknowledged. Because of this.

Her curls were pulled by the wind.

You would never be asked to stay by me. That is not love. That is affection cloaked in dread.

Uncertain of what he wanted her to say, he gazed at her.

Gently, she put a hand over his.

Accept the position. Explore the planet. Do not expect me to disappear, though. Even when they are far away, some people tend to stick around.

Two weeks later, he was gone.

It was a calm flight to Lima. Elliot gazed down at the shore below as the plane rose, the cliffs a ribbon of remembrance against the ocean. In his bag, he had two journals: one with Mara's sketches and the other with his photos. It was a silent promise in paper and ink that she had given him before he departed.

Jagged hills, lush valleys, and vanished civilizations shrouded in mist were among the scenes that whirled through the months. With his camera in hand, he recorded everything, yet something always felt a little bit lacking. It seemed as though he was capturing beauty without its pulse.

Every week, he wrote to Mara. lengthy emails

Every now and again, a picture with the words, "This made me think of your tree."

Her responses were filled with drawings, student anecdotes, and tidbits of her daily life. They turned become lifelines, tiny portals to the world he so desperately desired.

By the time he got back, Crescent Bay was no longer under the influence of winter. The cliffs were green with fresh life, and the air was chilly but gentle.

With his camera draped over his shoulder and his heart pounding, he stood at the brink.

As he had envisioned, she was waiting there.

Her eyes gleamed as she said, "Hey, traveler."

His voice caught as he said, "I missed you."

Mara grinned. I missed you, too.”

From his bag, he took out a picture of the Andes at dawn. An unlikely tree that grew out of a cliff's crevice. Twisting toward the sky were its limbs.

He remarked, "When I saw this, I thought of you." as well as your tree. And how even stone-rooted objects can strive for light.

She moved in closer and lightly touched the picture. "You returned."

"I had always desired to. I simply was unaware of it until I departed.

Slowly and sweetly, spring blossomed all around them.

Mara taught at the same community center that Elliot started instructing photography classes. They developed collaborative seminars called "Drawing with Light and Line," which used photography and sketching to tell stories. Their pupils included seniors rediscovering their passions and inquisitive teenagers.

They always went back to the cliff on Fridays. Despite being bent and pounded by storms, the tree remained standing.

Elliot put his camera down one evening as the golden hour poured over them.

He took something out of his jacket pocket and added, "You know, I used to chase the light over the world." However, my favorite light is finally here. alongside you.

The little velvet package he unwrapped.

Mara gave a little gasp.

A little emerald, the color of her eyes when she laughed, was set within a thin gold band that made up the simple ring.

Elliot declared, "I no longer need to explore." "I have discovered my place."

At first, she remained silent. She simply nodded, tears streaming down her cheeks as the sun shone like stars.

On a warm September day, they were married beneath that very tree.

As the waves sang below, family and friends gathered on the bluff. Elliot dressed a suit with a camera around his neck, because he would, of course, record every moment, while Mara wore a dress the color of dawn.

The vista was vast and limitless in front of them as they stood hand in hand following the vows.

"Are trees capable of falling in love?" With a bird wheeling overhead, Elliot inquired.

Mara grinned. "With the sky only."

His forehead touched hers as he drew closer. "So I suppose I am a tree."

She answered, "And I am your golden hour."

Their narrative was shared on coffee shop walls and in local art displays years later. Side by side, her drawings and his photos are a tribute to love that may be discovered in small routines rather than large gestures. in being present. in collaborating to create. In repeatedly selecting the same person, the same light, and the same cliff.

They would climb the walk to that windswept tree every Friday, despite the fact that their hands were soft with age and their hair had turned silver.

The pursuit of light continues.

Together, we are still catching it.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 9 months ago

    Amazing story! So good! You’re a great writer

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