Rachel Reviews: HaiLOS by David Perozo
What would you think if you saw haloes appearing above people's heads? In Perozo's book, Drew, his main character, experiences exactly that.
The premise for David Perozo's book is an interesting one. We follow Drew, a lawyer, who is also a would-be entrepreneur, hoping the analyser he has developed is a hit. His invention takes information from urine and offers lifestyle advice and most importantly supplements so that you are, scientifically and biologically, your best self. Testing it on himself, he experiences what could be strange side effects, which raise questions and uncertainties for our protagonist.
A bit of a loner, Drew is our narrator throughout and is engaging as a guide through the properties of his experimental device and his quest to make it more widespread. But can we trust him?
The title of the book reveals the key idea of the book: Drew's life becomes dominated by haloes and not due to an invasion of God's own envoys. The haloes appear above the head of everyday people and Perozo shows how Drew deals with this revelation and what it means. Initially, the haloed people he encounters are strangers but as more appear and Drew convinces himself he's not hallucinating, he becomes more involved with the individuals with these odd manifestations. Where does this lead? Well, that's for the reader to find out.
There was much to like about this book. Perozo's prose is accomplished and the narrative flows, has direction and the dialogue is convincing. Drew is likeable, funny and feels like a safe pair of hands. With regard to the writing, there were no times where I was thrown out of the action of the book by continuity or editorial errors: in that, it's strong. And the book ends positively for the most part with ends tied albeit, in my opinion, a little loosely.
To expand on that, it's that it felt like there was scope for more. And that was true of the novel as a whole: it's not that it wasn't fulfilling but there were times where I was expecting more tension or conflict and the book didn't present that. That's not to say that there aren't tense moments as there are but these are not the drivers of the book.
But there's lots to recommend it in the dialogue and its fluidity and as a piece of escapism, this is what I would call a solid read. It's imaginative, well-written, entertaining. Give it a go.
Rachel Rating: 4/5 stars
This review was first published on Reedsy Discovery where I was privileged to read it as an ARC:
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Intriguing conceit huh?! I often feel that way at the end of Stephen king book (not all) was that it? When there was so much room for more. I am reading 100 years of solitude for an online book club type thing. I am quarter of the way in and have little idea what is specifically going on but sometimes the prose is sweeping and very poetic. Trying to stick with it but it has fallen by the wayside the last few days. How are you? Did you enjoy your trip? Have you finished the serial? Or is it continuing? I’m behind but saved my spot in an open tab.😊
This sounds like an amazing premise for a book. I might have to check it out.
I think it would be astounding to see Halie’s above people - different colors and shapes. I have seen auras before…. Thanks for the review!!
Enjoyable review… I’m tempted by it!🧐 I like the premise and could put up with its ‘shortcomings’… it will have to get at the end of a long line 🤣. I just removed a very long read off my list.
Great review, Rachel.
If even you were expecting more tension or conflict, then I know for sure this book ain't for me. It wouldn't be able to hold my attention, lol