My Sci-Fi Madness #1 Dissing Dune

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This article contains spoilers for the books “Dune” and “Dune Messiah.” If you haven’t watched the movies or read the books yet, consider this a warning.

A Short Summary of the Book

“Dune,” written by Frank Herbert and first published in 1965, is an epic science fiction novel. The story mainly takes place on the desert planet Arrakis. Arrakis is the only source of “spice,” the most valuable substance in the universe. Spice extends human life, expands consciousness, and enables space travel. At the center of the story is the Atreides family and the epic journey of young Paul Atreides, the family’s leader.

Main Characters

• Paul Atreides: The son of Duke Leto Atreides and Lady Jessica. After moving to Arrakis, he discovers extraordinary abilities within himself.
• Duke Leto Atreides: Paul’s father and the leader of House Atreides. He takes control of Arrakis but faces a conspiracy by House Harkonnen and the Emperor.
• Lady Jessica: Paul’s mother and a member of the Bene Gesserit sisterhood. She trains Paul in the ways of the Bene Gesserit.
• Baron Vladimir Harkonnen: The former ruler of Arrakis and enemy of House Atreides. He plots with the Emperor to destroy House Atreides.
• Stilgar and the Fremen: Stilgar is the leader of the desert people, the Fremen, who accept Paul and Jessica into their tribe. The Fremen know the secrets of Arrakis and its spice production.

Plot Development

• Move and Betrayal: Because spice is only found on Arrakis, the Emperor doesn’t let one family control it for too long. He gives Arrakis to House Atreides, taking it from the Harkonnens. House Atreides moves to Arrakis and is betrayed by the Harkonnens. Duke Leto is killed, and Paul and Jessica escape into the desert.
• Meeting the Fremen: Paul and Jessica are barely accepted by the Fremen, who don’t trust outsiders. But Paul quickly wins their hearts and becomes their leader, known as “Muad’Dib.”
• Final Battle and Victory: Paul organizes the Fremen, teaches them superior combat techniques, and defeats the Harkonnens and the Emperor, taking control of Arrakis.

Themes

• Power and Control: The control of spice and political intrigues.
• Environment and Ecology: The desert ecosystem of Arrakis and the Fremen’s harmony with the planet.
• Messiah and Destiny: Paul’s destiny as the chosen one and his impact on the people.
• Human Potential and Evolution: Paul’s Bene Gesserit training and the limits of human potential.

“Dune” is one of the masterpieces of science fiction literature, with complex characters, a rich world, and deep themes. The epic journey of Paul Atreides and the mysteries of Arrakis take readers on a fascinating adventure.

What Bothered Me

Note: These are just my personal opinions and feelings. I’m a big reader. You might think differently, and I respect that. I don’t think it’s necessary to read an entire series to understand a single work better. I just share my feelings here. Your comments won’t change my feelings, but I’m always open to respectful discussions.

Note 2: I know the author wrote this work under very difficult conditions. I read many articles about it:

· There was nothing like it.

· He sent the work to 20 publishers. The sci-fi trend back then favored shorter and more impactful stories, so it was considered too long and rejected without being read.

· He faced many personal challenges, and the first two books didn’t get much attention.

I remember Frank Herbert with respect. I hope he resolved his issues with whatever he believed in before he passed away. Without this series, science fiction wouldn’t be where it is today. Thank you, Frank, for your big-hearted contribution. I will have mixed reviews of the first two books.

• Time Jumps: “Dune” frequently uses time jumps that interrupt the flow of the story. These jumps make it difficult to follow the development of characters and events. For example, the sudden shift from Paul’s training to him taking control of Arrakis, and the abrupt decline in “Dune Messiah,” made it hard for me to fully connect with the story and left character development feeling superficial.
• More Fantasy than Sci-Fi: Although “Dune” is marketed as sci-fi, it contains many fantasy elements. Apart from a few sci-fi elements like ornithopters, Arrakis’s ecology, and Fremen suits, the story is dominated by fantasy elements such as the Bene Gesserit’s genetic manipulations, Alia’s special powers, and prophecies. This might disappoint those looking for pure sci-fi.
• Lack of Space Travel Details: Despite its central role, space travel is not detailed much in “Dune.” Herbert focuses more on political and religious intrigues than on the technological details of space travel. This left a significant gap for me since space travel is usually a detailed and fascinating aspect of sci-fi.
• Paul’s Godhood: Paul Atreides is often praised and elevated to god-like status, but in my opinion, he doesn’t fully live up to these praises. In later parts of the story, he shows helplessness and weakness. His prophecy abilities and leadership promise much at first but fall short in the second book. Either make him a god or a more flawed character. The book tries to explain, but I remain unconvinced!
• Huge Numbers and Lack of Detail: Claims like “Paul conquered 13,300 planets” and “killed 61 billion people” are made. I wish the author had described just one planet’s conquest in detail! Different types of planets like water, lava, or forest planets with unique challenges would have been interesting.
• Predictable Plot: Paul Atreides’s transformation into a hero is quite cliché and predictable. Starting as an ordinary young man and ending up as the “chosen one” is a classic sci-fi and fantasy trope. Instead of adding a unique twist, Herbert’s story often follows a predictable path.
• Political and Ecological Messages: While deep and thought-provoking, the political and ecological messages in “Dune” often overshadow the sci-fi elements. These messages sometimes take precedence over the sci-fi aspects of the story.
• Mentats: Despite being highly praised, mentats are not explained well. How can Hawat work with the baron? Mentats are supposed to be “human computers” making fast calculations. His only conclusion is, “If Leto is dead, so be it. I must work. The baron’s mentat is dead, so I’ll take his place.” This is frustrating!

There are more things I could dissect, but let’s stop here. I think I’ve criticized enough.

“Dune” fans, as I mentioned above, I welcome your comments.

Overall Assessment

In conclusion, “Dune” was a sci-fi work when it was first written. Today, among so many sci-fi books, I can’t call it pure sci-fi. I can only call it “a fantasy book with sci-fi elements.”

I am curious about the “Butlerian Jihad” book. It might have more sci-fi elements related to the war between AI and humans, but it might not. Anyway, I changed my mind.

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