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How to Edit Your Manuscript Effectively as a New Author

Essential Tips for Refining Your Story

By Timothy L. CorlissPublished about a year ago 5 min read

Editing is often one of the most crucial steps especially for the new members of the authoring world and for new authors, it's the most critical step where you have to ensure your work is well arranged. I, as a writer, have realized that editing is not only limited to correcting mistakes, but it also involves improvement of ideas, characters, and the plot itself. It has its fearsome moments but as long as it is systematized, it can be a very enjoyable process that takes the work to the next level. Therefore, we have an editing task ahead of us and let's see how best to go about it.

The Importance of Editing

Although it is very easy and tempting for a writer to begin self-editing their work, let us first briefly explore why editing is so critical. This is where your manuscript takes shape as it is cutting edge and where every writer prepares to check and analyze if their players come out right, if the course of events is logical, and if the point drives home. Good editing can turn an average read into a great – even entertaining and more communicative – compelling narrative. For rookie writers is an important action that helps nourish trust and increases their viability as a writer. Enjoy the process: There is no writer who is not willing to endure the rounds of revisions for an imperfect manuscript.Embrace the procedure—it’s a sign of a committed writer!

A Comprehensive Roadmap to Self-Editing

Take a Break

Instead of heading straight for the edit mode, it is better for the author to take a rest and distance themselves from the composed work. This break may last a couple of days or even a week according to how busy one’s timetable is. Stepping away allows you to return with fresh eyes, making it easier to spot inconsistencies, awkward phrasing, or plot holes.

Read Through for Structure

When you come back, do a read-through of the whole manuscript with an emphasis on the general layout and flow of your work. Observe how the story unfolds. Is there a reasonable progression of the action? Are there parts of live performances that do not seem to make any sense or do not seem necessary? Pay attention to pacing – there are perhaps too many slow parts in a row can drag down the excitement or too many rapid parts which may be leaving the audience bewildered.

Focus on Character Development

Then it is time for the next important point, character arcs. A clear sense of purpose and the noticeable development of each character should run through the entire plot. So the following questions should be included in your analysis:

Do your characters grow, or change at all?

Do their actions follow their characters?

Do they have separate voices that distinguish them from each other?

It is helpful to devise a character for every important character to include their respective attributes, aspirations, and destinies. This exercise can elucidate whether or not you were able to successfully express what happens along their way.

Review Dialogue

Dialogue can change the fortunes of any story. At this stage, it is important to pay attention to the characters. Do you think their dialogues are convincing? Does the dialogue match their character and background? Read the dialogue aloud—this is a good technique for exposing awkward wording or unnatural interactions between characters. Each character should have their own way of speaking, particularly in dialogues where there should not be too much information or exposition. Characters should reveal their thoughts and feelings naturally through their conversations.

Check for Consistency

In every manuscript, consistency is the golden rule. Go through what you have written to ensure that there are no loose threads cut or inconsistencies within the details. Did the eye color of a certain character change? Was a subplot brought into the story but never finished? Use a timeline or even a plot diagram to keep tracks of major incidences and actions by characters in the course of a story. This will help you ensure that all pieces are coordinated.

Refine Your Language

Now it’s time to get into the nitty-gritty of language. This is where you will prune your sentences to their simplest but most effective forms. Concentrate on:

Redundancies: Eliminate phrases that repeat the same idea.

Wordiness: Trim down overly long sentences to improve readability.

Strong verbs: Weak verbs spoil the content of your writing. Make use of vigorous verbs in their place.

For example, rather than saying “he walked quickly,” we can enhance the sentence as: “he sprinted,” or “he dashed.” The right word can convey so much more!

Proofread for Mechanics

Once you have come up with the manuscript, it is recommendable to concentrate on the basic requirements of grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Try Grammarly or ProWritingAid to help you prevent common mistakes, but don't depend on them too much. Reading your manuscript backward, sentence by sentence, can help you spot typos and grammatical issues that you might otherwise overlook.

Get Feedback

If and when you are comfortable with the changes, the next step is to distribute the manuscript to beta readers of your choice. Seek out those who are able to offer helpful feedback and are familiar with your category of writing. Be prepared to look at their suggestions and accept the fact that more changes will be necessary. Remember, this is all part of the process, and their perspectives can offer valuable clarity.

Final Touches

Finally, once all the revisions have been accepted, the final read of the transcript has to be done. Look for any remaining issues and make sure that all pieces now come together and make sense. This is also a good time to do the proof reading of your manuscript, that is if you intend to submit it for publishing and need to be in accordance with the required standards.

Know When to Stop

Finally, be aware of when it is proper to stop polishing your work and let it be. Edits tend to bounce back and forth without resolution and interminably pause at one point or the other, but this is where it is very important to let go. Have faith in the process, and keep in mind that there is no such thing as a perfect manuscript anyway. Concentrate on the aspects of improvement you were able to achieve as a result of editing and the preparation you have made for your following project.

Closing Remarks

Editing is an essential skill in writing. And this is where aspiring authors come to a realization—it’s a long, hard work that is systematic and sequential. As a new author, embracing this process will not only improve your current work but also sharpen your skills for future writing endeavors. That’s it! Grab your manuscript, a cup of tea, and get going on it! Don’t forget, each edit is one step closer to the final revelation of your story to the world.

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About the Creator

Timothy L. Corliss

I’m a content writer with 20 years of experience, passionate about books and storytelling. I love sharing my insights on writing, editing, ghostwriting, and publishing. Join me as I explore the journey of bringing stories to life!

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