Saroyan Coles
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I want to empower others with my writing. I have always dreamed of seeing my name, on something.
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Never Giving up on Myself:
Never Giving up on Myself Angela H. Fitts is her first-ever published work. There are grammatical errors, but overall, the pace of her book was spot on. The book opens with her birthdate and defines her character traits. According to Angela, “Playing music keeps my mind at peace.” (p. 7) I found this to be a great attention grabber to hook the reader in. I would have loved to have had an example of lyrics block quoted to emphasize her point further. “We were wearing ponytails, when I met her.” (p.9) This quote creates great imagery. Angela goes on to talk about the weight of heartbreak she has endured. I would love to see, the author structure her book over three main events of heartbreak. That way her personal stories developed further.
By Saroyan Coles4 years ago in Journal
Roland and the Rose Princess:
One fall morning, I heard my stepmother call for me from the kitchen. Her calmness causes a stir inside my core. “Gisela, she growled, here is a spoon for you.” The warm water flung off the spoon sprinkling droplets on my face. I squinted from the unexpected shower that greeted me like the day. “The pond that rest on the edge of the garden, you must empty the pond out by hand. Again, she warned, if the task is not done by nightfall, you know what will happen child.”
By Saroyan Coles4 years ago in Fiction
Roland and the Rose Princess:
Once, I had a family with a sister, her heart was ugly, and a stepmother whose heart dreadfully wicked. Once upon a time, I fell in love with a prince of blood. He and I planned to run away together. Us riding upon his horse chasing the sunset into a happier tomorrow. We were as happy as prince.
By Saroyan Coles4 years ago in Fiction
