Rivals
Subtle competition never hurt anybody.
"You know, I can't stand you," Katrina muttered under her breath as she stalked away in the direction opposite of Jamie. "I know," Jamie smirked, watching her take off, snapping a photo of her with his Nikon DLSR.
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Ashley Lima
I think about writing more than I write, but call myself a writer as opposed to a thinker.
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Become a paid subscriber to get access.Lol, I knew where this was going! I really liked that he called her Turtle! That was so funny and cute! Loved your story!
I had a feeling you were going to go in that direction. You did a great job outlining the characters personalities. I think I found a couple of typos but overall, great work.
Really good, Ashley. Completely draws us in. Great detailing within the scene too. Well done, friend :)
I’m so invested in Jamie and Katrina. I have to know what happens! 💕 But seriously what a great story, the build up was great. The details are enough to give us pictures and feel like we can seee it in our mind. The characters are likable and flawed. I love this!
Great story Ashley, with an ending I didn’t see coming! Isn’t it funny how we sometimes treat the people we’re attracted to? Brilliantly done, thanks for sharing!