Breakup Song
An acrostic poem.
Dinner was supposed to be at 7:00, but I'm singing songs in a karaoke bar. Someone I don't know is my duet partner. They sing horribly, but so do I, and
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Ashley Lima
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Become a paid subscriber to get access.You really painted a picture with this. It was so identifiable. The emotions, feeling came through so clear and poignant
This is so good, you think it's just simple of the face of it but it's got many layers 😁
Beautiful!! I love how much you packed in this.
Whooo! Ashley this is smooth like 🧈!! Your structure 🪨 🪨 and your meter 🎶 🎶 Far from karaoke night on this one. Outstanding work 👏 👏
Awesome poem!