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The Last Breath of the Tide

A lone man battles the sea, memories, and himself — in a race against the deep

By FaizanPublished 7 months ago 2 min read

The sky was a brutal shade of gray, the kind that warned sailors before storms and haunted survivors afterward. Waves slammed like fists against the broken shell of a small fishing boat, now splintered and useless. In the chaos of wind and salt, a man struggled to stay afloat — lungs burning, arms aching, heart pounding in terror.

His name was Eli Dawson.

A seasoned fisherman from a coastal village, Eli had faced many storms, but nothing like this. The sea today wasn’t angry — it was merciless. His boat had been swallowed in a single monstrous wave. Now, Eli drifted alone in the vast ocean, with nothing but a shredded life vest, a bruised rib, and the fear that this might be the end.

For hours — or minutes; time had lost meaning — he fought to stay above the surface. The cold stole his strength with every second. Every breath was a battle. Every wave felt like a final blow.

And yet, as the sea tried to drag him under, something strange happened.

Eli remembered.

He remembered his son, Jack, building paper boats and floating them in puddles after the rain. He remembered the laughter of his wife, Lena, echoing off their porch on summer nights. He remembered the scent of salt and grilled fish, the comfort of cracked wooden floors, and the warmth of a hand held across the table.

The ocean tried to silence those memories. But they clung to Eli like lifelines.

As he floated, half-conscious, he saw the faces of those he loved — not in the clouds, but within himself. And with them came regret. Regret for every angry word, every missed dinner, every storm chased too far from shore. The ocean, in all its cruelty, was offering him a mirror. Not just of his life, but of who he had become.

The horizon blurred. He wasn’t sure if it was rain, or his eyes, or death coming quietly.

But still, he kicked.

He wasn’t ready. Not yet.

A seagull screamed in the distance — a sound that didn’t belong so far from land. Was it real? Or memory?

Then, faint but unmistakable: the sound of a boat engine. Distant. Fading.

He screamed. Once. Twice. A gurgle followed. His voice cracked like glass in the wind.

Nothing.

Then — a shape.

A speck.

A dot.

Growing.

A miracle.

A coast guard vessel appeared between waves, its searchlight slicing through the rain. Eli’s strength was gone, but his eyes locked on the light. He didn’t speak. He didn’t need to.

They saw him.

Strong arms pulled him from the grip of the sea. Blankets wrapped his body. Voices shouted over radios. He coughed salt and seawater, eyes wide in disbelief.

He had lived.


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Days later, Eli sat in a hospital bed, sunlight pouring through the window. Jack, now thirteen, sat beside him, clutching a comic book. Lena stood near the window, silent tears in her eyes.

Eli didn’t speak of the storm. He didn’t need to.

He spoke of the silence — of the moment when the sea stopped sounding like waves and started sounding like memories.

He spoke of the line between fear and hope. Between giving up and giving everything.

“I don’t know how I made it,” he whispered.

“You didn’t,” Lena said softly. “We pulled you back.”

And he understood.

It wasn’t just the boat that saved him. It was the love that lived on land — the people who wouldn’t let him be forgotten.


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Moral:

When the world pulls you under, it’s not strength alone that saves you — it’s the will to return to what matters most.

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