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“The Fall of the King”

The Legacy of the Broken King

By Sixmund Salmon KombaPublished 7 months ago 5 min read

“The Fall of the King”

In the heart of the great African savannah, where the golden grass whispered ancient secrets and the wind carried tales of life and death, there lived a lion named Kivuli. He was not just any lion—Kivuli was the undisputed king of the valley, feared by all and challenged by none. His mane was as dark as storm clouds, his roar like thunder cracking over the plains, and his eyes burned with pride and ambition.

For years, Kivuli ruled with brute strength and ruthless cunning. No predator dared to hunt when he hunted, no rival dared to growl when he roared. Hyenas slunk away at his approach, leopards vanished into the trees, and even the vultures circled cautiously above his kills. He had taken down buffalo, zebras, giraffes, and once, even a crocodile that had wandered too close to his watering hole.

But Kivuli was not satisfied.

He wanted a legacy. He wanted a story that would echo long after his bones had returned to dust. And so, he set his eyes on the most dangerous prey of all—the elephant.

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The Dream of Immortality

The idea had first come to him as he lay beneath the baobab tree, blood still warm on his chin from a wildebeest he had taken down alone. Watching the dust swirl into the sky, Kivuli had thought: Any lion can kill a buffalo. But only a legend can bring down an elephant.

His pride—four lionesses and two young males—warned him. “You do not need to do this,” said Nyoka, the oldest and wisest of his lionesses. “It is not our way. Elephants are not prey. They are the earth’s memory. To touch one is to awaken wrath.”

Kivuli scoffed. “What is the use of power if not to prove it?” he replied. “The savannah will speak my name long after the stars grow cold.”

No one argued. No one dared. Not even the wind.

The Hunt Begins

For days, Kivuli watched a small herd of elephants that passed near the watering hole—five cows and two young bulls. But among them was the one he wanted: Ndovu, the old bull, massive and weathered, with a single tusk and deep scars across his flank. He moved with the weight of a hundred seasons, yet there was wisdom in his slow steps. He was the protector, the guardian, and the one all others followed.

Kivuli waited. He studied.

Then, on the fourth night, as the moon hung low and the stars burned like white fire, Kivuli made his move.

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The Ambush

At the edge of the forest, where the river bends and the trees thicken, Ndovu had paused. The herd had moved ahead, trusting the great bull to rejoin them soon. But this was what Kivuli had waited for. Alone. Vulnerable.

He sprang from the brush like a thunderclap, his claws flashing, teeth bared. The forest erupted in chaos. Birds screamed, monkeys scattered, and the night trembled.

Kivuli leapt upon Ndovu’s back, clawing at his spine, aiming for the neck—where the blood is richest, the breath most vital.

But the old elephant did not fall.

With a cry like the cracking of mountains, Ndovu reared. He shook. He charged backward, smashing into the trees. Kivuli held on, biting, tearing, roaring. Blood sprayed. Dust rose.

The earth itself seemed to rage.

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The Turning Tide

Other animals gathered in the shadows—the hyenas, the jackals, even a leopard on a branch, all watching the battle between king and giant. It was something no eye had seen in generations. Even the air stilled.

But Kivuli had underestimated more than just size.

Ndovu spun with surprising speed and slammed his bulk sideways into a tree, crushing the lion’s ribs. Kivuli yowled and fell to the ground, winded but not broken. He staggered to his feet, face twisted in fury, and charged again.

This time, Ndovu met him head-on.

A single tusk pierced Kivuli’s chest, lifting him into the air like a ragdoll. Blood rained down on the roots.

The lion gasped.

He clawed the air.

And then—Ndovu flung him into the branches of a fig tree.

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The Final Silence

Kivuli’s body hung there, sprawled and twisted, limbs dangling like broken branches. His golden eyes dimmed as the stars watched from above.

The forest was silent. The onlookers stood still—predators and prey, enemies and rivals, all united by awe. The jackals whimpered. The hyenas backed away. Even the vultures waited.

Ndovu, his chest heaving, turned and limped away without a sound. He did not trumpet, did not celebrate. He simply returned to the herd, bloodied but unbowed.

And above the tree, the broken king swayed with the wind.

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The Mourning and the Warning

When dawn broke, the savannah buzzed with whispers. The tale traveled like fire through dry grass. From the termite hills to the salt plains, animals spoke the name “Kivuli” with wonder and fear.

The lionesses came to find their king.

Nyoka stood beneath the tree, eyes wide with sorrow. She did not wail. She did not weep. She only said, “You were a flame that burned too bright. And flames, my king, are always consumed.”

One by one, the lions walked away.

They left him there—not buried, for kings who challenge the gods do not rest beneath the earth. They hang above it, to remind the living what hubris costs.

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The Legacy of the Broken King

In the days that followed, a strange reverence surrounded that fig tree. No predator hunted near it. No prey fed under it. Even the vultures avoided the branches.

And the young lions of the savannah would gather at twilight, gazing up at the silent skeleton and whispering, “He tried to kill the elephant.”

But elders would shake their heads and say, “He tried to become more than a lion.”

And others, with grim voices, would add, “He succeeded. For now, his bones speak louder than his roar ever did.”

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The Lessons in the Wind

Seasons passed.

Grass grew.

Rain came and washed the blood away, but not the story.

The lion’s bones slowly vanished, taken by time and the roots of the fig tree. But still, the story endured:

• That power without wisdom is a curse.

• That pride, when swollen, leads not to glory but to ruin.

• That even kings must know their limits—or be forced to learn them.

And in the hush of night, when the stars blink and the wind tells stories to those who listen, one can still hear:

“There was once a lion who hunted an elephant… and was lifted into the trees.”

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  • Aleta Dubreuil7 months ago

    This lion Kivuli is quite the character. Reminds me of when I took on a tough project at work. Everyone said it was too risky, but I was determined to prove myself, just like Kivuli with the elephant.

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