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Looking for stars

Looking for stars

By lslsppasPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Looking for stars
Photo by Martin Brechtl on Unsplash

I was riding a blind horse with a limp,

Whip into the night; -

Whip into the night,

I'm riding a blind horse with a limp!

I rush into the dark night,

To find a star; -

In search of a star,

I rushed into the dark wilderness.

Tired, tired of my crotch,

The star has not yet appeared; -

The star hasn't shown up yet,

Tired. Tired of being in the saddle.

This time there was a crystal light in the sky,

There lay an animal in the wilderness,

A dead body lay in the dark. -

This time there was a crystal light in the sky!

Contemporary Art

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lslsppas

wedded

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Anna 2 years ago

    That was beautiful🥹🥹

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