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I was riding a blind horse with a limp,
Whip into the night; -
Whip into the night,
I'm riding a blind horse with a limp!
I rush into the dark night,
To find a star; -
In search of a star,
I rushed into the dark wilderness.
Tired, tired of my crotch,
The star has not yet appeared; -
The star hasn't shown up yet,
Tired. Tired of being in the saddle.
This time there was a crystal light in the sky,
There lay an animal in the wilderness,
A dead body lay in the dark. -
This time there was a crystal light in the sky!
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That was beautiful🥹🥹