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Until the last sunrise

“Some goodbyes come with a promise to return… even if it takes a lifetime.”

By Qaisar JanPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

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Give Me Until the Last Sunrise
By [Your Name]

The first light of dawn crawled over the horizon like a silent prayer, casting golden hues across the frost-kissed earth. Elijah stood at the edge of the cliff, wind teasing the collar of his long coat, his silhouette still as stone. Behind him, the world slept — unaware that time was running out.

He had made a pact, one forged not in ink, but in desperation.

The last sunrise — that was all he had left.

Beneath the cliff, nestled between snow-draped hills, lay the village of Aelwyn. A place of warmth, laughter, and stories passed down by candlelight. It was there that Elijah had once found his purpose, and more importantly, his heart — in the form of a woman named Liora.

Liora had been the flame to his moth, the melody to his silence. She was the healer, the storyteller, the one who spoke of stars like they were old friends. When the fever took her, Elijah had gone to the edge of the known world in search of miracles.

And he found one.

The Hermit of Veylun — a man whispered about in legends, said to command forces older than the sun. Elijah had begged, offered gold, blood, his soul. The Hermit had asked only one thing: time.

“I will return her,” he’d said in a voice that sounded like wind through dry leaves, “but she will walk with you only until the last sunrise.”

It had been twenty-four hours since she awoke — eyes wide, voice soft, as if no time had passed. But the shadow behind her smile haunted Elijah. It was the smile of someone borrowed from death.

Back in the village, Elijah found her seated beside the fire, humming an old lullaby. She looked up as he entered, her face glowing in the amber light. “You always vanish before dawn,” she teased gently. “Trying to race the sun again?”

He knelt beside her, unable to hide the tears that welled in his eyes. “I just needed a moment,” he whispered, taking her hand. It was warm — almost too warm, as if defying the cold truth.

Liora brushed his cheek. “I know what you did,” she said, not accusingly, but with profound sadness. “You brought me back. But, love… some doors aren’t meant to be reopened.”

“I couldn’t let you go.” His voice cracked. “Not when I had the chance to hold you again.”

She leaned her head on his shoulder, her voice a soft breeze. “Then give me this day. No mourning, no regrets. Just us. Until the sun rises.”

They spent the day walking through the village, laughing with children, dancing to flutes by the market, tasting bread still warm from the oven. The world shimmered, beautiful in its impermanence. Every smile was edged with sorrow, every heartbeat loud in its countdown.

As twilight bled into night, the stars emerged, glittering like forgotten memories. They returned to the cliff, where the heavens seemed close enough to touch.

“Do you remember when you first kissed me here?” Liora whispered, her eyes reflecting constellations. “You said the sky had never looked so alive.”

“It still doesn’t,” Elijah replied, voice breaking.

A quiet fell over them, the kind that only lovers nearing goodbye could share. Then she turned to him and asked, “When it’s over… will you let me go?”

“I don’t know how.”

“You’ll have to learn. And live. For both of us.”

He wanted to scream at the stars, curse fate, bargain again. But deep down, he knew the truth — some moments are gifts, not promises.

The horizon began to pale.

Liora closed her eyes. “Take me to the river,” she whispered.

They walked hand in hand, silence heavy but tender. As the first blush of sunlight brushed the treetops, they reached the riverbank. Mist rose from the water like breath from the earth.

She stepped into the shallows, looking back one last time.

“Elijah,” she said, “you gave me a perfect day. Don’t ruin it with sorrow.”

“I love you,” he choked.

“I know. And I will carry it with me… beyond.”

Then, as the first full light of the sun broke over the trees, Liora faded — like morning mist, like a memory too beautiful to last.

He fell to his knees, the emptiness echoing louder than any sound. But in the wind, in the sunlight, in the rustling leaves — he felt her.

Still with him.

Not gone. Just… home.

Elijah stood, eyes closed, the warmth of the sun on his face. And though grief would walk beside him, so would love. Not borrowed, not stolen — but eternal.


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Qaisar Jan

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