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The Sound of Rain on Mars

Some memories don’t fade. They fall.

By EL QARJAOUI BadreddinePublished 6 months ago 3 min read

1. First Drop

The first raindrop fell at 06:42 Martian Standard Time.

Alya Sorin didn’t feel it at first. The hum of the terra-chamber vibrated under her boots, and the air filters hissed with their usual industrial rhythm—but something had changed. Something subtle. The red dust around her boots turned dark in splotches. And then came the sound.

Plink.

Soft. Hollow. Almost imagined.

Then again.

Plink. Plink. Plink.

She looked up, mouth slightly open. The sky, once a muted ochre, now shimmered in pale gray. Cloud clusters were forming—real clouds. Vapor thick enough to condense. She didn’t need the readout on her visor to confirm it.

It was raining.

She yanked off her helmet.

Alarms pinged in her suit, warning of protocol breaches, but she ignored them. The air was thin, but breathable. Achingly cold, and metallic on the tongue. But bearable. She tilted her head back and let the rain kiss her skin.

Alya Sorin had waited her whole life for this.

2. Inheritance

From inside her coat, she pulled out a worn cassette player. Analog. Obsolete. Ancient.

It had belonged to her mother—Dr. Samara Sorin—one of Earth’s final climatologists before the oceans dried. Samara had recorded the last natural rainfall on Earth before she died, decades before Alya was even born.

She pressed play.

“If you’re hearing this, my starseed, then it means Mars has bloomed. It means the sky finally opened. You’ll never know Earth like I did, but I hope you’ll know the sound of rain.”

The voice crackled, warped by time and radiation, but it felt close. Like her mother was right there in the wet soil beside her.

Alya’s throat tightened.

She had grown up on Mars, in the domes of Lys-9. She had never seen rivers. Never touched grass. She studied water the way other children studied dragons. It had always been fantasy. Until today.

Rain fell harder now.

It wasn’t like Earth’s warm storms. It was colder, thinner. The droplets took longer to fall in Mars’ low gravity. But they fell.

And they sang.

3. Echoes of Earth

The cassette continued.

“Rain has memory, Alya. It holds the shape of voices, the weight of grief. It fell on lovers and wars. On every goodbye. If you stand in it long enough, you’ll remember things that were never yours.”

She closed her eyes and let the voice wash over her. The Mars around her disappeared. She saw cities she’d only read about. Trees swaying. Thunder rolling across oceans.

A tear slid down her cheek—but it wasn’t from sorrow. It was awe.

Then the tape glitched. There was static—sharp and irregular. A sudden shift in tone.

“Alya, if you ever hear this—if rain has returned—then know this: they lied to you.”

She blinked.

“The Terraforming Council didn’t preserve Earth’s data out of nostalgia. They hid it. Buried what they learned. Mars’ core has a fault line—deep and unstable. If the water goes too deep, it will trigger seismic collapse. The rain is beautiful, but it’s a countdown.”

Static.

Silence.

End of tape.

4. The Truth Beneath

Alya stood frozen. The rain drummed on her shoulders, suddenly colder. She stared at the player in her hand, then back at the soil, where water was already soaking in.

They knew.

Terraforming was never just about hope. It was also a wager. A delicate, dangerous bet on timing. And no one had told her the cost.

She looked to the sky, where clouds continued to swell. The storm would grow.

She was no longer a witness to history.

She was standing on a bomb.

5. The Choice

Alya could return to base. Report the anomaly. Trigger emergency lockdown. Shut down the rain cycle before it was too late.

But something held her back.

Her mother’s voice.

“Some things are worth breaking for. Some beauty isn’t meant to last—it’s meant to matter.”

Alya dropped to her knees and pressed her palm into the wet soil. She closed her eyes, listening—not to warnings or calculations, but to the music of the rain.

The storm would come.

But so would the flowers.

End.

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