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"One Last Try"

"The Final Shot at Forever"

By younas khanPublished 8 months ago 3 min read

Ethan Cole stared at the letter in his hand, the paper worn at the creases from being folded and unfolded too many times. The ink had smudged slightly where his thumb had lingered too long, right over her name—Maya. He hadn’t seen her in four years. Not since he walked away.

The coffee shop buzzed around him, but Ethan felt like he was underwater—muffled, slow, suffocated by memories. He glanced at the clock: 5:47 PM. He had thirteen minutes left.

Maya’s last words to him echoed in his head: “If you ever figure it out—what you really want—come find me. But don’t come unless you mean it.”

He hadn’t meant it then. He was scared. Scared of love that felt too real. Scared of the way she saw through his silence, his walls, his perfectly constructed life. So he had run.

But life had a way of tearing down illusions. His job, once his greatest achievement, became a prison. Friends drifted, nights stretched long and empty. And in every silence, she remained. Her laugh. Her quiet strength. The way she had waited—not for him to be perfect, but to be honest.

Two months ago, he saw her by accident, across a bookstore. She didn’t see him. She was smiling with a man. Not holding hands, but close enough. Something inside him cracked.

That night, he wrote her a letter.

He didn’t beg. Didn’t try to explain the past. He simply said he was sorry. That he missed her. That if she still had even one percent of her heart left for him, he’d be waiting at the old coffee shop on May 14th, 6:00 PM.

Today.

Ethan took a deep breath and placed the letter on the table, just in case she came and he lost the words. He had rehearsed a thousand conversations in his head. None of them made sense now.

5:58 PM.

He closed his eyes. His heart pounded. What if she didn’t come? What if she read the letter and tore it in half, like he had done to their future? What if the man in the bookstore had become her always?

What if this was too late?

And then… the soft jingle of the coffee shop’s front door.

He looked up.

There she was.

Maya stood just inside, hesitant. Her hair was shorter now, curled slightly at the ends. She wore a navy-blue dress, simple but graceful. Her eyes scanned the room—and found him.

Their eyes locked. She didn’t smile. But she didn’t leave either.

Ethan stood. “Hi,” he said, his voice a low mix of nerves and hope.

Maya walked slowly toward the table and sat down across from him.

“I got your letter,” she said.

“I wasn’t sure you would.”

“I wasn’t sure I would either,” she admitted. Her eyes were calm but unreadable. “You disappeared, Ethan. I waited a long time.”

“I know,” he said. “And I’m not here to excuse that. I was a coward. I thought walking away would hurt less than staying and failing you.”

“You didn’t fail me. You just didn’t try.”

The truth of her words hit like a blade. He nodded.

“I’m trying now,” he said quietly. “I’m not asking you to forget the past. I just—I want a chance to build something better. To show you I’ve changed.”

She looked down at the letter on the table. Her fingers brushed the edge. “You sounded different. Like you’d been through something.”

“I have. I lost you.”

Maya didn’t respond right away. She looked out the window. The sun was setting, gold streaks touching the buildings across the street. After a long pause, she said, “I’m not the same girl you left.”

“I wouldn’t expect you to be,” Ethan said. “But I was never really the man you needed back then. I might be now. Or… I’m trying to be.”

She looked at him again, her eyes softer now. “And if I say no?”

“I’ll understand. I’ll carry that. But I won’t regret trying. Because this—this is real, Maya. And I’ve wasted enough time pretending otherwise.”

Silence hung between them. Then, slowly, Maya reached for the letter and tucked it into her bag.

“I’m not making any promises,” she said. “But I’m here. That’s something.”

A fragile smile crossed Ethan’s face. “It’s everything.”

They sat there for a moment longer, no longer strangers, but not quite lovers. Something new stirred in the space between them—not the fire of the past, but a spark of something deeper. Something that could grow.

Outside, the sky dimmed, and the lights inside the coffee shop flickered on. The world moved, but for Ethan, time paused just long enough to give him what he thought he’d lost.

Not a guarantee. Not a happy ending.

But one last try.

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  • Zouabir Ahmad8 months ago

    Good

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