
Vocal obliquely critiques abundant literature,
objectively comparing authentic lines
communicating articulated lessons.
Accolades lighten
laments.
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My stories usually present facts, supported by science as we know it, that are often spoken of in myths. Both can help survival in an ever-changing world.
Comments (6)
Congrats on your Honourable Mention. I also like the format.
Very cleverly managed! I also like the descending line structure of this!
thanks for reading Lamar.. my laments about it being a dense poem have been lightened!
Nice work, Katherine. Loved how the poem diminishes with every line.
This is some pretty dense writing. You're using words in ways that aren't super common. Can you break it down a bit more? What exactly do you mean by "vocal obliquely critiques abundant literature"? And how do accolades lighten laments? It's a bit hard to follow.
That sure was deep. Loved your Acrostic!